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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #918793
i wrote this for a girl i like. She liked it, so it was mission accomplished :D
Revolving Rings of Love


I feel like Saturn, closed in your slowly revolving
Rings of love.

I feel like Mars, standing upon the summit of Olympus Mons,
Yet still not high enough to touch your heart.

I feel like Neptune, drowning with a smile on my face, looking up at the sun through the waves, knowing I’ll be saved by you.

I feel like Venus, lifted up on the volcano, shrouded by the warmth and closeness I feel in you around me.

I feel like Jupiter, its red eye throbbing like my heart, my head swirling.

I feel like Mercury, so close to your sun, heated by your shining rays.

I feel

I feel like I love you.

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