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Rated: E · Poetry · None · #2333220
I am looking for any constructive criticism to ameliorate my writing abilities.
Outside, the drops of rain fall.


Yet,


the sun rarely shines its rays on those who believe life hell.


When night comes,


and the last beams of light abandon those who think life a paradise,



Hope becomes a reverie.


Since,

scarce are those still alive to witness its beauty.

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