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Rated: 13+ · Fiction · Horror/Scary · #2330787
Caleb Voss moves to a secluded town, hoping to rebuild his life, but shadows linger near.
The black Nissan Titan rolled slowly into the driveway, the soft hum of its V8 engine a soothing counterpoint to the unsettling stillness of the Virginia countryside. Caleb eased it to a stop, letting his hand rest on the gearshift momentarily before turning the key. The engine purred into silence, leaving only the faint rustle of wind through the nearby woods. He glanced into the rearview mirror, where the pods holding all his belongings sat stacked neatly along the side of the house.
The house itself was small—a single-story ranch nestled in a clearing at the edge of the woods. Its siding, once white, had weathered to a dull gray, streaked with grime and moss where the trees leaned too close. The windows were intact but streaked with dirt, and the front door hung slightly askew in its frame as if the house were exhaling a tired sigh. It wasn’t much, but it was his.
He stepped out of the truck, pausing to take in the property. The yard stretched unevenly in every direction, patches of overgrown grass and weeds breaking through the gravel driveway. The porch was little more than a flat concrete slab, cracked in places, its surface dusted with leaves and pine needles. A single, rusty chair sat in one corner, its once-bright red paint flaking away like old skin.
Caleb ran a hand over the polished hood of his truck as he passed, feeling the smooth warmth of the metal beneath his fingers. He kept the Titan immaculate, a shrine to the memory of his wife. She’d surprised him with it ten years ago, a celebration of his success as an author. That same day, she and Max were killed, leaving the truck as both a gift and a ghost.
Shaking off the thought, Caleb lit a cigarette and walked toward the house. The first drag sent a dull burn down his throat, grounding him. He exhaled a thin stream of smoke, watching it curl in the air before dissipating.
The front door creaked loudly as he pushed it open, the sound reverberating through the empty interior.
The air inside was cool and damp, carrying the faint smell of disuse. The floors were hardwood, their once-glossy surface dulled by time and scattered with scratches and scuff marks. The living room opened into a wide space with a low ceiling, making Caleb feel like the house was pressing down on him.
The walls were painted a pale beige, faded and peeling in places, revealing the original wood paneling beneath. A single ceiling fan hung motionless in the center of the room, its blades thick with dust. The fireplace along the far wall was functional but badly in need of cleaning; soot stained the brick, and a bird’s nest jutted out from the unused flue.
Cardboard boxes, some already half-unpacked, sat in haphazard stacks near the fireplace. The moving pods had done their job, but Caleb had been too exhausted to do more than drop a few essentials the night before: his duffel bag, a box of books, and a small cooler with beer and water.
The kitchen was visible through a wide archway, its linoleum floor curling at the edges like a dried leaf. The cabinets hung unevenly, their surfaces sticky with years of grease and grime. The sink was functional, though the water pressure was weak, and the drip-drip of a leaky faucet echoed softly in the silence.
Caleb glanced toward the bedrooms, their doors ajar. The rooms were smaller than he’d expected, their beige walls matching the rest of the house. One had a single mattress lying flat on the floor; its frame was still packed away in one of the pods outside.
“It’s livable,” Caleb muttered to himself, though the words felt hollow. It was livable, but it wasn’t a home—not yet.
He set the framed photo of his wife and son on the fireplace mantle, brushing away a layer of soot to make room. Her smile, frozen in time, was as vibrant as ever. Max grinned at him from the photo, holding his favorite dragon toy close to his chest. Caleb looked away before the memories could take hold.
The couch he’d dragged in from the pod sat in the corner, still wrapped in plastic. He peeled back one edge and sank into it, the cushions stiff from years of storage. Reaching into his pocket, he lit another cigarette, the orange glow casting faint shadows on the walls.
The woods outside drew his gaze again. The view from the living room window framed them perfectly, their dark forms swaying gently in the breeze. He thought he saw something shift between the trees—a flicker of movement, pale and quick—but when he blinked, it was gone.
His fingers tightened around the cigarette. “Just trees,” he muttered, exhaling smoke that clouded the glass.
The woods, however, didn’t feel like just trees.
The air outside was cooler now, carrying the faint tang of damp earth and wood smoke from some unseen fire in the distance. Caleb stepped out onto the cracked concrete porch, the cigarette dangling from his lips as he lit another with a quick flick of his lighter. The flame briefly illuminated his face, highlighting the deep lines etched around his eyes and the scruff on his jaw that hadn’t seen a razor in days.
He exhaled a stream of smoke and surveyed the yard. The woods loomed at the edge of the clearing, their dark silhouettes blending into the deepening twilight. The house stood alone, with no neighbors in sight and no streetlights to break the darkness. It was what he’d wanted: isolation. Quiet. A place to write without distractions.
But now, standing there with only the trees for company, the quiet felt oppressive. The kind that pressed against his ears, amplifying the smallest sounds—the scrape of a leaf against the ground, the faint creak of a branch swaying in the breeze.
He took another drag, watching the glow of the cigarette tip dance in the fading light. The woods seemed darker now, their shadows stretching longer, deeper as if the trees were creeping closer. He laughed nervously to himself, shaking his head. “You’re letting your imagination run wild already,” he muttered.
The Titan sat parked where he’d left it, gleaming black even in the low light. Caleb’s gaze lingered on it for a moment. It still looked as pristine as the day he’d driven it off the lot, the day his wife surprised him with the keys. He could still hear her voice teasing him about how he’d insisted on picking the exact color and trim package.
The memory twisted in his chest, sharp and unforgiving. He turned back to the house, unwilling to let the past take hold—not here, not now. He wasn’t ready to unpack that part of himself.
The porch creaked as he leaned against the railing, staring into the woods. He didn’t realize he’d been holding his breath until the sound came again—a faint whisper carried on the breeze.
It was too soft to make out, barely audible, but it prickled the hairs on the back of his neck. Caleb straightened, his heart thudding against his ribs.
“Hello?” he called, the word cutting through the silence.
No response.
The whisper came again, this time clearer, though still impossible to understand. It wasn’t the wind—there was no wind. The trees stood perfectly still, their branches motionless against the twilight sky.
“Someone out there?” Caleb stepped off the porch, gravel crunching under his boots. He squinted into the shadows, trying to pinpoint the source of the sound. He thought he saw movement for a moment—a pale flicker darting between the trees.
His chest tightened, and he froze in place. The cigarette trembled between his fingers. “Get it together,” he muttered, shaking his head.
Turning back to the house, he tried to laugh it off, but the sound came out thin and forced.
Inside, the house felt colder than before. Caleb closed the door behind him, twisting the deadbolt with a metallic click. He glanced toward the windows, his reflection faint against the darkness outside. The trees loomed in the glass, unmoving but still alive in their stillness.
The kitchen faucet dripped steadily, the sound echoing in the quiet. He poured himself a glass of whiskey, the amber liquid catching the dim light from the overhead bulb. He took a long sip, the burn spreading through his chest, grounding him.
He set the glass down on the counter and rubbed his hands over his face, trying to shake the unease. It was just the quiet getting to him, he told himself. The woods weren’t anything special—just trees.
The rocking chair by the window creaked softly, breaking the silence.
Caleb froze, his eyes darting toward the sound. The chair swayed gently, though there was no breeze, no movement to account for it.
His breath caught in his throat. “Probably settling,” he muttered under his breath, though he didn’t believe it.
Grabbing the whiskey, he retreated to the couch and lit another cigarette. The smoke curled around him, a comforting barrier against the house’s unsettling stillness. But even as he tried to relax, his eyes drifted toward the window and the woods.
The whisper came again, faint and distant, like a voice carried on the wind. Caleb sat up straight, his heart pounding. He stared at the window, but the woods outside remained still, the shadows unmoving.
He downed the rest of his whiskey in one gulp and lit another cigarette. The ember glowed brightly in the dark room, the only light besides the dim bulb in the kitchen.
“Just trees,” he whispered to himself. “Just trees.”
The last drag of his cigarette left the room in near darkness, the glowing ember fading to black. Outside, the woods stood silent and still, but Caleb couldn’t shake the feeling that someone was watching him.
Caleb set the half-unpacked box aside, his back protesting as he stretched. Hours of lifting and sorting had turned into a blur of cardboard, dust, and faded memories. He glanced at the small stack of awards on the mantle, their dull gleam catching the afternoon light. They felt like relics from a life that didn’t quite belong to him anymore.
“I need a break,” he muttered, heading to the kitchen.
The whiskey bottle sat on the counter, its amber liquid shimmering in the fading sunlight. He poured a generous amount into a glass, the sound of the liquid filling the quiet kitchen. The first sip burned, chasing away the lingering ache in his muscles. He carried the glass to the spare bedroom, now doubling as his writing space, and set it beside the notebook waiting on the desk.
The room smelled faintly of old wood and dust, but the desk was clean. Caleb had wiped it down earlier, positioning it just right in front of the small window that looked out toward the woods. The trees were a darker green now as dusk settled in, their tops swaying gently against the orange-pink sky.
He sat down, pulling the notebook closer. The blank page stared back at him, a void as daunting as the woods outside. Caleb took another sip of whiskey and picked up the pen, tapping it against the paper as if the rhythm might coax out an idea.
“This is supposed to be it,” he said aloud, his voice cutting through the stillness. “The comeback. The book that fixes everything.”
The words felt hollow, but he couldn’t shake their weight. His publisher stopped calling a year ago, and the steady decline in sales finally caught up with him. He’d told himself the move to King George would clear his head, that the quiet would help him focus. But now, sitting in this house that wasn’t quite his yet, he felt more lost than ever.
He scrawled a line across the top of the page:

“Chapter One.”

He stared at the words, willing them to expand into something more. But nothing came. He tapped the pen again, harder this time, and took another long sip of whiskey. His mind wandered back to his last bestseller, the one that had landed him the movie deal. That book had practically written itself, every idea flowing effortlessly. Now, even forming a single sentence felt like dragging stones uphill.
Finally, he pressed the pen to the paper again, the ink smudging slightly as he wrote:

“In the end, it wasn’t the darkness that consumed her—it was the light.”

He stopped, staring at the line. It wasn’t bad, but it didn’t feel right. The words seemed disconnected, forced. He scratched them out, the pen digging into the paper, leaving faint grooves beneath the ink.
A cigarette. That’s what he needed. Caleb grabbed the pack from his jacket and lit one, the ember glowing faintly in the dim room. He leaned back in the chair, exhaling a thin stream of smoke toward the ceiling.
His gaze drifted out the window again toward the woods. They were darker now, the shadows between the trees deepening as the sun dipped lower. He thought he saw something move for a moment—a pale flicker darting between the trunks. He squinted, leaning closer to the glass, but it was gone as quickly as it appeared.
Caleb shook his head and stubbed out the cigarette in a makeshift ashtray. He flipped the notebook closed and stood, grabbing his glass. “Not tonight,” he muttered to himself.
As he left the room, the blank page lingered in the back of his mind, as haunting as the woods outside.
Caleb returned to the desk later that night, the house silent around him except for the occasional creak of settling wood. His glass of whiskey was nearly empty, and a thin haze of smoke hung in the air. The ashtray beside him filled with the remnants of his cigarettes. The notebook lay open on the desk, its blank pages a quiet challenge.
“Come on,” he
The night deepened, the house settling into its quiet rhythm. Caleb sat at the desk in his makeshift writing space, the glow of a single desk lamp illuminating the pages of his notebook. His pen scratched across the paper, the words pouring out as he leaned into the story.

“The forest was alive. Not just in the way all forests are, teeming with insects and rustling with unseen creatures, but in a deeper, older way. It watched. It waited. It knew.”

He paused, staring at the sentence. It wasn’t bad. Better than most of what he’d written in the past year. He took a sip of whiskey, letting the burn settle in his chest as he tapped the pen against the desk.
The story was forming, its edges jagged but vivid. The protagonist—a man haunted by his past—was beginning to take shape, his struggle mirroring Caleb’s in ways that felt uncomfortably close to home. But that was the point, wasn’t it? To pour himself into the work, to turn his pain into something worthwhile.

“He’d moved to the house to escape, to rebuild. To leave behind the wreckage of his old life and start again. But the forest wouldn’t let him. It whispered to him in the dark, its voice soft and insistent, promising secrets he could never understand.”

The words came faster now, his pen flying across the page as the story unfolded. Caleb leaned into the momentum, his thoughts coalescing into vivid scenes of tension and dread.
Then his phone rang.
The shrill tone cut through the silence, jolting him out of his flow. He grabbed the phone from the desk, grimacing when he saw the name on the screen: Lori Callahan.
“Hey, Lori,” he said, his voice flat.
“Caleb,” came her clipped, professional tone. “I was just about to leave you another voicemail. How’s the new book coming along?”
“I’m working on it,” he said, taking another sip of whiskey.
“You’ve been saying that for months,” she snapped. “The publishers are getting impatient. They need to see something—anything—soon, or they’re pulling the plug.”
“I said I’m working on it,” Caleb repeated, his grip tightening on the glass.
Lori sighed, her frustration bleeding through the line. “Look, I’ve fought to keep them interested, but my hands are tied here. If you don’t deliver soon, you’re done. You need this, Caleb. You know that.”
He closed his eyes, the weight of her words pressing down on him. “I’ll finish it,” he said, though the certainty in his voice sounded hollow even to his ears.
“Send me pages as soon as you have them,” Lori said, her voice softening slightly. “Something polished. I’ll check in next week.”
“Got it,” he muttered.
The line went dead, leaving Caleb alone with the silence. He set the phone on the desk and leaned back in the chair, staring at the notebook. The fire from earlier had dimmed, the spark dulled by Lori’s call.
“Just keep going,” he muttered to himself.
He picked up the pen again, determined to regain his focus.
Sleep came reluctantly, dragging Caleb down into its murky depths. At first, it was comforting—a haze of warmth and familiarity. He was back in his old apartment, the kitchen light spilling into the living room. His wife’s laughter floated from somewhere nearby, soft and melodic. The sound pulled at him, filling the space in his chest where her absence always lingered.
But as he tried to move toward the kitchen, the world shifted.
The warmth vanished, replaced by a cold so sharp it stole his breath. The kitchen dissolved, and he was standing in the woods.
The trees towered around him, their branches twisting into unnatural shapes. The ground beneath his feet was soft and damp, the air heavy with the scent of wet earth and decay. Whispers drifted through the air, faint and indistinct, brushing against his ears like the rustle of dry leaves.
Caleb turned, searching for the source, but the woods stretched endlessly in every direction. The whispers grew louder, forming words he couldn’t quite understand. Shadows moved between the trees—pale flickers that darted just beyond his vision.
Then he saw it.
A figure stood in the distance, its shape hazy and undefined. Its arms stretched unnaturally long, ending in branch-like fingers that clawed at the air. Caleb tried to move, but his legs felt rooted to the ground.
The whispers swelled, becoming a cacophony of voices, each one overlapping the other. The figure stepped closer, its movements smooth and unnerving.
“Stay back,” Caleb whispered, his voice trembling.
The figure’s arm reached out, its branch-like fingers brushing against his chest. A coldness seeped into him so deep it burned. Caleb gasped, the world spinning around him as the whispers swallowed him whole.
Caleb jolted awake, his chest heaving as he clawed at the blankets. The room was dark, the faint glow of moonlight casting long shadows on the walls. His breath came in quick, shallow bursts, his heart pounding as the echoes of the dream lingered in his mind.
He turned his head toward the window, his eyes searching the tree line. The woods stood silent, their dark forms blending into the night. But for a moment, Caleb thought he saw something move—a flicker of pale light darting between the trees.
He blinked, and it was gone.
“Just a dream,” he whispered to himself, though his voice lacked conviction.
Lying back down, Caleb stared at the ceiling, the silence of the house pressing in around him. Sleep didn’t come easily, and when it did, the whispers were waiting.
He muttered, gripping the pen tighter. “You’ve done this before. Just… start.”
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