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Rated: 18+ · Chapter · Action/Adventure · #2330332
The first chapter of my book. Please critique just be kind. Thanks
Chapter 1 Map in the Mountains

The plant’s deep green foliage appeared almost waxy, casting a dim sheen under the filtered light of the forest canopy. Each leaf tapered to a pointed tip, its edges finely serrated and curling slightly, giving the plant an almost predatory look. Tiny, pale flowers clung to the thin stalks, easily overlooked against the plant’s menacing, silent presence.
The repugnant odor had caught her attention—a scent like rotting fish flesh, impossible to ignore. Eden tightened the strap of her sagging leather pack, grounding herself back in the reality of her task. Her bright green eyes cut through the early morning mist clinging to the trees, the cool air stirring stray strands of her thick braided brown hair in the breeze. In the distance, birds called, their songs echoing through the quiet forest, filling her with a calm only solitude could bring. Moments like this—wrapped in silence, on the edge of discovery—were what made the hunt worth every risk. Yet even as she reveled in the stillness, a shadow of unease lay underneath, a sense that each step took her closer to answers that might only complicate the questions.
Eden had honed her expertise in plants and wildlife at the University of California, Berkeley, under the mentorship of Dr. Samuel Hayes, a respected ecologist and archaeologist with a passion for hands-on learning. Dr. Hayes often led her and other students into the wild, teaching them not only to identify plants and understand their roles in ecosystems but also to appreciate how the environment could reveal secrets of ancient cultures. Those early field days sparked Eden’s fascination with nature and history alike, transforming her into a skilled observer and fueling her adventurous career in artifact hunting.
Over the years, as they worked together on archaeological projects, their relationship deepened from mentor and student to close friends bound by a shared love of discovery. They spent countless hours side by side in rugged landscapes, sifting through layers of earth to uncover artifacts, decoding forgotten symbols on crumbling stones, and navigating remote terrains that few dared to explore. Each adventure strengthened their bond, and Eden came to rely on Dr. Hayes’s wisdom and unwavering determination as much as her own.
Their friendship had been forged in the thrill of discovery, through long nights spent around campfires sharing stories of their findings, and days filled with excitement as they pieced together fragments of lost civilizations. Dr. Hayes became a steady presence in her life, a guiding force whose passion for preservation and knowledge matched her own. He had shown her not only the intricacies of the natural world but also the delicate art of protecting its secrets. For Eden, their shared adventures and discoveries weren’t just about history—they were about trust, loyalty, and a deep-seated respect that ran as deep as the ancient artifacts they uncovered together. Losing him would mean losing a part of herself, of her purpose.
This plant, however, reminded Eden of a grim lesson Dr. Hayes had once taught her. It was part of a group of highly poisonous species he’d warned her about, recounting the tragic story of a family who had unknowingly consumed it. A young boy had suffered a painful death, with symptoms of jaundice, agonizing urination, and eventually a coma. She could still remember the somber look in Dr. Hayes’s eyes as he recounted it, his voice weighted with urgency.
Dr. Hayes had always been passionate about sharing his knowledge to prevent such tragedies, often holding free educational seminars for hikers, ecologists, archaeologists, and anyone eager to learn. For him, awareness was a means of protection, a way to keep others safe in the wild and to respect the land as both a living environment and a repository of history.
Three months had passed since Eden received the urgent, unsettling message from her close friend, Dr. Hayes. His research site had been broken into and ransacked, and in the chaos, he had been attacked and left injured by the thieves. They had forced their way into the secluded lab, making off with precious research materials, rare plant specimens, archaeological artifacts, and notes meticulously gathered over years of fieldwork. Dr. Hayes, despite his careful precautions, had been caught by surprise, and when he tried to defend his work, the intruders had left him badly hurt.
Eden’s chest tightened at the thought of him lying in a hospital bed, his body bruised, his hands—the same hands that had unearthed countless artifacts—now wrapped in bandages. He had always guarded his work with utmost care, especially his research on rare plants with potent medicinal properties and his findings that connected botanical knowledge with ancient practices. But even his caution hadn’t been enough to protect him from those who knew exactly what they wanted.
The feeling of helplessness haunted her; if someone could break into his secluded lab, steal his research, and harm him, she knew there were forces at work far beyond her understanding. And yet, she felt compelled to follow the path he had left her, like an invisible hand leading her deeper into his world.
Despite Dr. Hayes’s warnings about the risks, Eden couldn’t stay away. Her heart broke not only for his years of hard work that had been stolen and destroyed but also for the pain he had suffered defending it. She wanted to see if there was anything she could recover, any fragment of his research that might have been overlooked in the thieves’ haste. She made the journey to the remote site, only to find the entrance forced open, the floor strewn with scattered papers and remnants of a once-orderly workspace. Years of dedication lay trampled, with muddy boot prints scuffing pages of detailed observations. Broken glass, shattered plastic, and fragments of old pottery littered the ground. There, amid the wreckage, lay Dr. Hayes’s prized field journal.
Its pages had been ripped hastily, the torn edges revealing fragments of sketches, plant notations, and archaeological findings, as if someone had been searching for something specific. The remaining pages fluttered in the draft from the broken windows and open doors, whispering the hollow remnants of Dr. Hayes’s work. This was no random act; the missing pages hinted at a targeted, deliberate theft. Whoever had done this knew exactly what they were after.
Eden carefully unfolded the worn note Dr. Hayes had given her, the ink faded but legible, the corners softened from her countless readings. His words were precise, as always, and his handwriting steady. Dr. Hayes never called or emailed her; he insisted on communicating through handwritten notes, believing that paper left fewer trails. He was cautious to the point of paranoia, convinced that phones and digital communication could be compromised too easily. Protecting artifacts, wildlife, and, most of all, Eden herself was paramount to him. His written words were as much about delivering information as they were about ensuring her safety.
This time, he’d directed her to a small, hidden town nestled high in the Georgian mountains, a place he described as “where time forgets and secrets are guarded.” The name Sighnaghi was scrawled in his looping handwriting, along with a cryptic hint: “Seek the Library of Shadows, where myths sleep beside the forgotten.”
The journey to Sighnaghi had been arduous, but the town itself felt as if it had been waiting for her. Perched on a hillside, the town seemed frozen in time, with cobbled streets winding around aged stone houses, their walls covered in ivy and faded paint. The air was cool and damp, laced with the faint scent of mountain herbs and old wood. People moved quietly, casting glances in her direction, as if they recognized something in her—a stranger, perhaps, or a seeker of long-lost things.
Sighnaghi seemed almost like a place lost to legend, where myth and history mingled. At dusk, when the lanterns were lit, their golden light flickering against the stone walls, the town took on an otherworldly aura. It was a place that didn’t belong entirely to the present, a sliver of another age.
Eden wandered through the twisting streets, searching for the library mentioned in Dr. Hayes’s note. Eventually, she found it, half-hidden beneath the shadows of towering stone structures, as if it sought to blend into the mountainside itself. Above the door, in faded letters barely visible against the worn wood, were the words “The House of Forgotten Lore.” The air seemed heavier here, thick with the weight of untold stories.
Inside, the library was cloaked in shadows. Books lined the walls from floor to ceiling, their spines worn, their titles faded into obscurity. Dust floated in the dim beams of light that filtered through narrow, high windows. The air smelled of old paper, ink, and the earthiness of stone walls, as if the library had absorbed the secrets of the land over centuries.
At the heart of this quiet sanctuary sat the librarian. He was an ancient figure, his face lined with age, his eyes sharp and alert as they fixed on her with an intensity that made her pause. He looked as though he had been there for centuries, guarding the secrets of the library like a sentinel of forgotten knowledge. His long, slender fingers turned the pages of a brittle tome with reverence, each movement deliberate, as if he held the weight of countless lives in his hands.
“You seek the shadows,” he murmured, his voice barely more than a whisper, a sound that seemed to drift through the air like smoke.
Eden nodded, her heart pounding in her chest. She explained her quest, her voice softened, respectful of the heavy silence around her. A mixture of excitement and apprehension buzzed in her thoughts, and she wondered if he saw it there, lingering in her eyes.
The librarian’s gaze held hers for a long moment, assessing her, weighing her intentions. Finally, he leaned forward, his voice dropping to a murmur that was almost musical, carrying the weight of a riddle as old as the stones.
“Where plants grow thick and shadows play,
the wise step lightly, lest they pay.
What blooms in shade, though fair to see,
can bring you low, bring misery.”
His words seemed to coil through the air, ancient and haunting. He leaned back, watching her reaction as he continued:
“Follow the path where others dare not,
but heed the warning I have brought.
For what is green is not always kind,
and harm may come to those who find.”
A shiver ran down Eden’s spine as his words sank in. The riddle lingered in her mind, each line wrapping around her thoughts like a vine, warning of both beauty and danger ahead. She wanted to ask more, to pull at the threads of his riddle, but she caught herself, sensing that more would not be offered so easily. He simply nodded and looked back down at his book, as though her presence had already faded into the background of his world.
Taking a deep breath, Eden thanked him and left the library, his riddle like a ghostly echo in her mind. With each step through Sighnaghi’s darkening streets, she felt the weight of his words pressing against her, urging her forward, reminding her that what lay ahead was far from ordinary and far from safe.
Eden sighed in relief; this had to be the answer to the riddle.
Before her, nestled in a tangle of forest undergrowth, was a small, worn stone marker, half-hidden by by the sinister plant, seemed to thrive only in the shaded corners of the clearing. The marker was rough-hewn, its edges softened by time and moss, yet just visible beneath the foliage were faint carvings. She knelt, brushing aside the leaves and wiping away the damp earth, her heart pounding with excitement and apprehension.
As her fingers traced the delicate grooves in the stone, she could just make out the etchings: strange symbols intertwined with the faint outlines of leaves and vines. The language was old, ancient even, and though she couldn’t read it, she could feel the weight of its message. It was a language tied to the forest, as if the plants themselves had whispered their secrets to whoever had once carved these symbols.
The librarian’s riddle echoed in her mind:
"Where plants grow thick and shadows play,
the wise step lightly, lest they pay."
The plants did indeed grow thick here, their roots weaving a dense, protective mat around the marker as if guarding it. Eden took a deep breath, feeling the presence of something far older than herself. The air was thick with the scent of damp earth and green life, a heady blend that felt both welcoming and foreboding.
She slowly rose, her eyes scanning the clearing for any other signs. And there—just a few paces beyond the stone marker—was a narrow path that seemed to disappear into a dense wall of foliage, overgrown yet unmistakably a trail. It was almost as if it had been waiting, hidden until she’d deciphered the riddle, and now revealed itself only to her.
Eden felt a chill as she stepped forward, the air cooling as the shadows deepened. She thought of Dr. Hayes, of the wisdom he had imparted, and the dedication they had shared. Her hand drifted to her pack, where his worn note lay. She wished he were here to see this, to guide her as he always had. But now, it was her path alone.
The trail twisted and turned, leading her deeper into the forest’s heart, where sunlight barely penetrated. Shadows danced around her, shifting with each step, until she reached a small clearing. At the center, resting on a large stone pedestal and half-covered in thick moss, was a strange cluster of rocks, intricately arranged as though placed there with intention rather than by nature. The rocks formed a natural, hollow crevice, almost like a nest, and within that shadowed hollow lay something faintly glinting.
Eden approached slowly, her heart a thunderous beat in her chest. Her eyes traced the edges of the rocks and the faint carvings along the outer stones—vines, leaves, and symbols that mirrored those on the marker she had uncovered earlier. Her breath caught. This was it; it had to be. She hesitated, feeling her mentor’s caution echo within her.
"For what is green is not always kind…"
She felt the weight of his words. Was she truly prepared for what might lie hidden in this ancient hiding place? This wasn’t just an object; it was something left for those who understood the forest’s language, and Dr. Hayes had guided her to it.
With trembling fingers, she brushed aside the moss and lichen clinging to the stones, revealing the hollow’s contents. There, wrapped carefully in a strip of faded cloth, was a piece of something that looked out of place—a sliver of parchment, brittle and darkened by time. Her fingers shook as she lifted it carefully from its resting place, her mind racing with anticipation.
As she unfolded the fragile cloth, she saw it was indeed an ancient piece of a map. Lines and symbols stretched across its surface, some familiar, others foreign, and there, near one corner, was a symbol she recognized—a mark from Dr. Hayes’s notes, one he had mentioned but never fully explained. Her pulse quickened. Could this map be connected to something far beyond this forest, something he had only begun to uncover?
She carefully studied the fragment, tracing its contours with her fingers. The lines etched on it were worn but decipherable, leading beyond the edges of the forest and hinting at places she hadn’t yet dared to explore. It felt like the beginning of something far bigger than she had imagined—a journey that reached beyond this forest and into mysteries long kept hidden.
As she traced the faded ink of the map, she felt an overwhelming mixture of excitement and fear. This wasn’t just a fragment—it was a call to something larger. The map hinted at paths she hadn’t walked, at secrets Dr. Hayes had protected and left for her to find. But she couldn’t shake the feeling that she was being watched, that the forest was alive, bearing witness to her discovery.
Eden folded the map back into the cloth and placed it carefully in her pack, her heart racing. The path she had uncovered wasn’t just a physical journey; it was a bridge into Dr. Hayes’s world, into a legacy he’d left her to continue.
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