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Rated: E · Poetry · Ghost · #2314664
A poem about ghosts trying to defend the land they once tread.
A pall of dread hangs heavy in the air,
The ramparts creak, a fortress in despair.
The churchyard stirs, where weathered tombstones weep,
Disturbed from rest, forgotten spirits creep.

From moonlit graves, a spectral host ascends,
Their tattered forms where mist and starlight blend.
Ancient warriors, their eyes like dying coals,
Bound by silent oaths to guard these hallowed knolls.

A mournful chorus whispers through the gloom,
The wind carries their song, a prelude to their doom.
Each spectral cry, a plea from bygone years,
Echoes of battles lost, of triumphs and of fears.

The living huddle, fear gnawing at their core,
Sensing unseen presences, the spirits at their door.
Lanterns cast long shadows, monstrous and grotesque,
As if the very darkness takes a haunting, twisted breath.

The drums of war, a heartbeat in the night,
Summon forth the legions, bathed in blood-red light.
A tide of steel and fury surging near,
Each footstep shakes the ground, amplifying the fear.

The spectral ranks stand resolute and brave,
Their spectral weapons raised, a challenge from the grave.
"This soil we hold," their chilling voices cry,
"Where honor sleeps, beneath a mournful sky."

The first wave crashes, a tempest of the damned,
Swords shatter against forms no mortal hand could brand.
The clash of ages rings out in the night,
Ancient spirits waging their eternal fight.

Each ghostly blow flickers with ethereal light,
A spectral dance of memory burning bright.
Yet living steel cuts deep, and spirits wane,
Their forms dissolve like mist upon a pane.

Whispers on the wind, a fading, haunting sigh,
The fallen find their rest where moonbeams lie.
And as the battle rages, fierce and bold,
A tale of sacrifice forever will be told.

With dawn's first light, the crimson field lies bare,
The ghostly chorus vanished into the air.
Their echoes linger, intertwined with pain,
Where heroes fought, and spirits rose again.




LINE COUNT: 40 Lines
WRITTEN FOR: "*Pencil*WINNER and NEW PROMPT - Due Friday, Feb 23"  Open in new Window.
PROMPT:

Feb 23, 1836, was the start of the Battle of the Alamo - a fort which Texan rebels (rebelling against the Mexican government which had claimed the territory since 1824) had been occupying. Two hundred volunteer Texan soldiers - including Davy Crockett - and a handful of civilians held the fort against several thousand Mexican soldiers for thirteen days. In the end, though, they were overpowered and nearly all the defenders were killed. Survivors were released as a warning to the Texan rebels elsewhere not to resist. Instead, "Remember the Alamo" became a rallying cry of Texan independence.

The moving opening scene of the TV show Firefly -- the Battle of Serenity Valley -- almost certainly hearkens back to this historical event.

For tomorrow, write a story or poem that is set in some sort of encampment or fort which is about to come (or is coming) under attack by overwhelming force.

Be creative! Is this a house of squatters whom the police are about to evict? A graveyard haunted by spirits of the departed who are about to be expelled? The last band of human colonists on a planet where they accidentally woke up the hideous space cicadas? Etc.
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