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This is my second One Scene example. It's sixty line long aka one minute. |
INT. PARENTS BEDROOM – JUST AFTER DARK LANCE, mid to late thirties, throws an ashtray with a lite cigarette at a closing door. Only an inch is what is left of the closing door when the ashtray hits it. VIVIAN, early to mid-thirties, opens the door a second later, but quickly closes it when Lance picks up an expensive looking vase. VIVIAN (talking through door) Don’t throw that. It’s one of the last thing that I still have left that’s from my mother. LANCE (looks at vase, then at door) That’s all you ever think about. Your dead mother. She has been dead for ten years. You need to let her go. The door slowly opens but stops about halfway open. Vivian peaks around the corner. Lance shakes his head sadly. Then he places the vase back on the table VIVIAN Is that why you are so mad at me? You never liked my mother. LANCE I didn’t like her because she never liked me. According to her, I wasn’t good enough for her. Vivian enters the room after opening the door completely. She keeps her hand on the door knob, though. VIVIAN You’re wrong about my mother. She’s like that with everyone. It was her way of letting you know she loved you. (beat) Every time I talk to her she only has good things to say about you. That’s just the way she was with everyone. LANCE It sure didn’t look like that to me. Why did she act like that? After removing her hand from the door knob, Vivian start to walk toward Lance. Lance sits down in the chair next to the table the vase is on. VIVIAN No one knows why she acted like that. (she stops in front of Lance) Is that why you are so mad at me? LANCE Of course, it’s not. I’m angry at you because I know about the affair you have been having. Today’s Prompt: A couple fighting Line Count: 60 |