The Grand Fiction Hotel

Welcome, welcome. Thank you for taking the time to stop by here.

You complete me, or rather your insightful and honest review completes me. Sure, sometimes it seems like I'm not listening, that's part of being a writer. But I absorb everything you tell me, and I use it to make myself better in the Hopes of landing the big one. That's right a place on the NYT bestseller list. I can only do that with your help, and your willingness to be honest with me.

If you choose to review a piece of mine, please be as honest as you can be. I am working on grammar, so if you notice something that is really wrong, point it out to me. How can I learn if I don't know? Every review is treasured, as long as it is honest and fair. That's all I ask for. Still confused? Check out this link for tips on great reviewing:

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Now you might be wondering what pieces I would like feedback on. That's a fair question, and I will attempt to answer it for you.

Here are some of my favorites!!!

This is a love poem

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Sonnet From The Friend Zone   (13+) The result of mixed signals #2132964 by Author Ed Anderson

This is the very first poem I wrote professionally. It's based on an actual experience I have had.

This is a comedic noir

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How I Became Your Father  (18+) Freaky Friday with a twist #2106846 by Author Ed Anderson

This short story is actually a spinoff from a play that is currently working its way on the contest circuit.

This is a quill award nominated kids story!

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The Boogeyman and The Missing Toy   (E) Two young ones go on a search for a missing toy. #2103359 by Author Ed Anderson

A children's story for you. Most of my writing tends to be adult oriented, so I figured that having a cute kids story would be helpful.

"Later That Same Day"  18+: First attempt at Noir, concept for a play

"Jeff and Jinxy Take Washington"  18+: The President does an interview to save himself.

"The Flash Drive "  18+: A personal favor evolves into a much bigger deal.

If none of the highlighted items interest you, there are a lot more in my portfolio!

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