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This is the first bit of the first chapter of a book I just started to write. Opinions?? |
| CHAPTER 1: MEETING THE NEW BOY Silky brown hair gently sitting below her shoulders, glistening dark brown eyes absorbing her surroundings, soft set lips perched nicely above her chin, small breasts relaxed perfectly on her chest, her suit hugging each curve of her luscious body. Her beauty caresses the eyes and the minds of many men as she struts past on her way to work as a business woman in the big city. New York is a place that makes her feel free. "Good morning miss elliott" greeted her co-worker with a smile. Her co-worker was a nice fellow who was very much serious about being in the business industry. "Good morning" replied miss elliott also with a smile. A sort of smile that shines so bright that it could linger in the mind of anyone who made her happy. |
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