Attempt to write a creepypasta about my character. Constructive criticism is appreciated! |
My name is Sam, and I love to play games. I used to have friends, but they called me mean names. I had cool eyes, too; one orange and one red, but just like my friends, they’re cold and they’re dead. I play baseball; well, I did, until I went blind. However, I can still see perfectly well inside of my mind. Can I ask you a question? I don’t mean to pry… But why do people, like you, have to lie? All these days are passing me by I don’t have a choice; no, there’s no other way— Please just stop squirming; I won’t go away. You can run all you want; feel free, try to hide, but I told you already: I can see with my mind. I hunt people like you, not for the blood or because it’s “divine”, I’m trapped in time I just want some good eyes I can use to replace mine. It’s easy you know; I’ve done it before. You just pop them out with a spoon or a fork, then detach them by cutting that red muscle there. I pop them in my head after cutting off yours (euthanasia, to be fair), and if they don’t work, then I just knock them both out clean up my face and wash my hands, and try to reroute, to find my next chance… in this maddening trance… It's been years; I want to see my mother, just one last glance... |