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Can a human prisoner survive in a jail built for giant monsters? Keep it a fantasy please |
| (9/21/2016: Under new management. Originally created by RedHurricane) Monster Gaol Welcome to Under Gloom, the most awful prison known to monster kind. Located 10,000 miles on a mountaintop above the city of Fearfield, this prison is nearly impossible to escape from. But that doesn’t mean you won’t try. You are a loutish human who was driven into Fearfield after committing a crime against monsters and thrown into Under Gloom. Now, you have to find a way to get out. Characters Wade Wilson- The main character. You. You’re a human who was exiled to Fearfield and thrown in prison for setting fire to the skirt of a harmless monster visiting the human world. You hate monsters and will do anything to get out of this nightmare of a jail. Lockette Ness- Your cellmate, a 500ft purple skinned Loch Ness Monster girl. Resembles a humanoid plesiosaur with a long neck, long indigo hair and fins for ears. She was imprisoned for aiding and abetting a smuggler. Unlike the other monsters, she’s friendly towards humans and would rather pay her debt to society than try to escape. Tries to warn you not to escape, but you never listen. Prison Staff Warden Destiny- Your worst enemy and the biggest monster in the entire prison. A cyan skinned gargoyle with long pink reddish hair, four horns on her forehead and a generous hourglass figure. Destiny takes her job as warden very serious. Nobody has escaped Under Gloom since she took over and she intends to keep it that way. She despises you because you have tried to escape more times than anyone else in the prison’s history and her patience with you is wearing thin. However, this attitude isn’t out of prejudice against humans. Destiny bares a slight resemblance to Demona and hates it whenever someone points out how she looks like a cartoon character. Belladonna Solanaceae- The vice warden. A 700ft yellow skinned manticore with a scorpion’s tail and three sets of sharp fangs. Belladonna is Destiny’s second in command. However, she is also after Destiny’s job as warden, basically the Starscream to Destiny’s Megatron. Destiny is aware of this ambition and the two of them don’t get along well. Belladonna might just let you go to get Destiny in trouble, if she doesn’t decide to eat you first. Belladonna's tail venom is lethal enough to kill a dinosaur. Doris Potter- A giant gryphon who always wears a leather mask. Doris is the prison's executioner and whenever she appears, it means that a prisoner is going to be put to death. Destiny only calls on her when one the worst criminals in the prison is due to die, but if you keep misbehaving in Under Gloom, you might see her soon enough. Iris Carumba- Iris is a red cyclops with a blue tattoo over her eye and long red hair. She's a special type of guard Destiny uses as a parole officer to check on prisons lucky enough to be let out of Under Gloom. However, Iris is as hard as parole officers come and likes to keep a close eye on the released prisoners under her watch. The Doctor (real name unknown) - An 800ft tall living mannequin who is an OC of the 12th Doctor. Her skin is red plastic. She has long, blond Nylon hair and green glass eyes. She has a slim figure with slight curves. She has doll like joints, which gives her mechanical, stiff movements. She wears a lab coat and glasses. Very little is know about Under Gloom's doctor. Even her real name is unknown, so everyone simply calls her The Doctor. She is very good at her job, but she is also know to be emotionless. This makes it very hard to get to know her. She speaks in a British accent, so people often tease her by making Doctor Who references. She tends to ignore them. Guards- Destiny’s prison guards are mostly sadistic thugs that brutalize the prisons. While Destiny has forbidden them from killing the monster inmates, humans are fair game. There’s a rumor that most of the humans that get sent to Under Gloom are eaten by the bloodthirsty guards. Cree Macbeth-Nile- A titanic 800ft tall werehyena, obese in body shape. She prefers not to wear clothes, but she can get away with it because of her fur covering her body. Cree is the most sadistic of the guards and a borderline sociopath who takes great enjoyment in the pain of the inmates. Unfortunately for you, humans are her favorite food and she always has her tongue sticking out. She has told you several times she looks forward to swallowing you whole. Clover Marathon- A giant grootslang, a type of reptilian monster resembling a green scaly elephant with the hood of a cobra and a snake like trunk that acts as a second mouth. While not as hyperactive as Cree, she is still just as bloodthirsty as she is when it comes to humans. Clover has somewhat of a rivalry with Cree and the two have challenged each other to see which one eats you first. Resembles a monster version of Clover from Totally Spies. Simone Sarutobi- A giant Nue girl. Basically a baboon with tiger arms and legs and a serpent’s tail. Simone is mute and only communicates through monkey like noises. However, she rarely eats humans and is far less sadistic than the other guards. She’s more likely to report you to Destiny. Icy Coldwind- A giant hourglass shaped roc harpy with an owl like beak and bright blue feathers. Icy is the newest addition to the guards and is somewhat clumsy and inept. But just because she’s young, doesn’t mean she’s harmless. She enjoys the taste of humans just as much as Cree and Clover. She can also create ice and snow by flapping her wings. Ironically, she’s cousins with Elle from Monster Arms. Aria Spectra Tazel - An 980ft tall Japanese Onryo who is an O.C. of the 12th Doctor. Aria has long, black hair that covers her face and pitch white skin with black eyes. She has an athletic build, but due to her macromastia, she has ZZ-Cup breasts. She wears the usual Under Gloom guard uniform tailored to fit her chest. When she was alive, Aria was a serious cop. After dying in a firefight, Aria came back as an Onryo to take revenge against the gang, which she got, but she then learned that she was permanently Earthbound. She moved to America and got a job at Under Gloom as a guard. She is cold and serious, never letting her guard down for a moment. She prides herself on never letting ANYONE escape. Inmates Ariel Wrench- A 300ft yellow-green skinned gremlin girl. She was arrested up for chop-shopping. She’s good with tools and is trying to build a machine to help escape from Under Gloom but none of her inventions so far have been successful. Bebe Ladin- An egyptian looking Cheshire cat giantess. She was a jewel thief who was eventually caught and sent to Under Gloom. She was hourglass shaped when she came in, but she’s been working out in the prison gym and has seriously buffed up, while still retaining her feminine looks. Despite your dislike for monsters, Bebe is very attracted to you and you might be able to use her. Destiny had her fitted with a collar to cancel out her invisibility. Priscilla Toben- A pudgy palish white skinned orc sorceress. Priscilla is skilled in potions but was imprisoned for practicing medicine without a permit. Priscilla is still trying to work on a spell or potion to escape, but hasn’t had luck due to limited materials. Darcy Fenton- An odd giantess boggart. She resembles a green gaseous ghost with plants and grass growing out of her back. It’s unknown what she’s in for because she never speaks to anyone and just stares off into space. The walls of the prison are specially designed to prevent creatures like her from ghosting out. Cornelia Ojo- A titanic Argus, a monster with one hundred eyes all over her body and silvery skin. Cornelia was arrested for illegal gambling. You’re the only one who knows it but Cornelia is Destiny's personal prison snitch and your last three escape attempts failed because she ratted you out to Destiny. Needless to say, she’s one of your least favorite monsters in the prison. Elaine Sarah Cotonza- A 750ft kitsune who is an OC of the 12th Doctor. Elaine has long red hair in a ponytail and red eyes. She has an houglass figure, though her incredibly large breasts are augmented. She has 8 fox tails, fox ears, and sharp teeth. She wears the usual Under Gloom inmate outfit. Destiny put a collar on her to cancel her shape shifting, though she can still change her voice. Elaine is a shape shifter who was arrested for Identity Theft when she tried to steal Destiny's identity. She had managed to take millions of dollars before she was caught and bought many things, including incredibly large breast implants. In Under Gloom, she's a fairly sociable prisoner, trying to get along with other inmates. She has a thing for muscular women, so she has a crush on Bebe. Janice Carver - A 844ft succubus who is an OC of the 12th Doctor. Janice's face is split in two due to her accident. The right half has snow white skin, long, straight black hair, and a green eye. The left half is horrifically burned, with short white hair and a milky white eye, both ruined in the accident. She has Lactose Overload Syndrome, her breasts being the size of beanbag chairs. The rest of her is slightly chubby. Her left arm is as badly burned as the left half of her face. Her clothing reflects this, being half sexy, half modest. Janice is a very broken woman. Thanks to her accident (which no one is sure of the details) she has become angry and violent at the world, thinking it as vile and cruel. Due to her now resemblance to him, people have nicknamed her Lady Two-Face. She also shares a quirk with him, though she had it before her accident: she can't make a choice without a flip of her silver dollar coin. Dark Side Inmates- There is a hallway on your level called the Dark Side. The Dark Side is where they keep monsters who committed crimes so heinous, they’re locked up for life. No human that has crossed into the Dark Side has ever come out alive. You only know of five inmates here but most of the monsters in this area are carnivores that wouldn’t think twice about eating you. Mariah Dark- A giant centaur with the lower body of a quagga (an extinct relative of the zebra). She was imprisoned for rape. The woman is so raunchy that she doesn't even care which species she attacks. You don’t know what she thinks about humans but being in her cell would be a horrible mistake. But you do know she only grabs male humans and you've yet to see one of them escape her clutches. Though you do hear a lot of screaming coming from her cell on a regular basis. Ursula Minor- A titanic grizzly werebear with a hatred against fairies and similar monsters. Ursula led an anti-fairy riot against the governor that failed. She’s easily recognizable by her missing left eye. Like most monsters in Dark Side, she is predatory towards humans. Persephone Howler- Alias, the white werewolf. A curvaceous albino werewolf girl imprisoned for cannibalizing other monsters. She’s locked up in her cell 24/7 because otherwise she’d attack the other inmates and has even gone after the guards. Persephone considers herself a gourmet among cannibals and was known for cooking her victims. However, she won’t pass off a yummy human. Persephone is a cousin of Lupa from Monster Arms and April from Monster Shores that neither of them like to talk about. Because of her vicious appetite, Destiny put a muzzle on her. Arethusa Dragneel- Alias, the doomsday dragon. A European dragoness with orange brown scales, ram like horns and long blonde hair. Arethusa was imprisoned for manufacturing deadly bombs that were used for murder. She’s very reclusive and will breathe fire on anyone dumb enough to come close to her cell, even the guards. (Note: she has a dragon's face, not a humans. I'm getting sick of those models of dragons) Yuri L- A titanic obese gorgon with blue pythons for hair. Yuri is the most dangerous monster in the entire prison. A deranged serial killer who abused her gorgon eyes to kill over one hundred monsters so she could mutilate their stone corpses for her own twisted amusement. Upon her imprisonment Yuri was fitted with a visor to negate her petrifying gaze. As sadistic as she is towards monsters, Yuri has been known to grab any human unfortunate enough to get close to her cell with her snake hair to either eat or torture. Sakuya- An addition by UltraGTS. Sakuya is a black spider drider resembling a pale skinned child despite being an adult. Sakuya committed every crime known to monster and human alike, but instead of giving her the death penalty, she was attached to a machine that puts her in an endless coma so she'd live out the rest of her natural life dreaming. However, the device can attach to humans to put them in her dreamworld and dying in the dream means dying in reality. Other Jacqueline Liza- A red haired hourglass shaped fairy. Jacqueline is the governor of the tri-city area of Horrorville, Terrordale and Fearfield and Destiny's boss. Sometimes she visits the prison to inspect it. You're not sure what she thinks of humans or if she knows a human is in the prison. She's deathly afraid of Ursula because the werebear made an attempt on her life. Bona Fete- An addition by Anonymous One. A 950ft tall muscular and gray skinned gargoyle bounty hunter who filled most of the cells in Under Gloom with captured criminals. She mainly wears a chest plate with a Punisher style skull on it with kevlar pants and combat boots and has black hair with tattoos covering her arm for everyone she's ever killed. Bona Fete is a loose cannon bounty hunter who will kill any target no matter what their crime was. Destiny doesn't like her much both because Destiny isn't fond of bounty hunters and because Bona is the daughter of the man who impregnated Destiny and left her. Regardless, if you do manage to escape, Bona might be sent to bring you back to Under Gloom Dead or Alive. Sekushi Kami (nickname Shi) - An 850ft Hari-onago who is an OC of the 12th Doctor. Shi's most notable feature is her immensely long, black hair, which ends in barbs. Her hair seems to be longer then she is tall. She has grey eyes and grey skin. She has above-average breasts, a slim waist, and a massive butt. She usually wears skimpy clothing to show off her curves. Shi can be described as a massive flirt. She loves women with a passion. Even if they are married, she'll "put the moves on them", flirting and showing off her body as much as possible. Her favorite targets are ghosts and women with ludicrously large chests, though anyone is fair game. If it's somebody who meets both of the above, she'll drop everything and focus only on them. However, she won't go after men or people under 20. She can control her hair, using them like extra hands. Lately, she's been going after Aria. Rules Try not to end the story too soon All monsters are giantesses. Normally 300ft is the minimum but many monsters in the prison exceed that height. No toilet stuff Fantasy monsters only. No mechas or mutates. No underage monsters. It’s a prison for crying out loud. This is a woman’s prison so male monsters are to be kept to a minimum. Male humans in the prison are fine. Nothing heavily sexual. Keep it PG13 Please no Male Preds or any interaction with Male Giant privates! I thought I didn't have to say it! Please also be willing to read and add to my other two monster giantess stories. Monster Shores http://www.Writing.Com/main/interact/item_id/1927548-Monster-Shores and Monster Arms http://www.Writing.Com/main/interact/item_id/1897471-Monster-Arms Have fun Special thanks goes to Spiral-And-Twist, Anonymous One, Ultimate Neo, Infinitebull and CrimsonFreak |
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