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Hoping to add a bit of suspense by not explaining, but I hope it's good.
She slammed her fists across the red light with loud beeps.

The shiffle shuffle of the plastic.

Her jingle jangle of piercings and the clicky clacky of her nails.

She thrashed and clashed the little squares and tore a piece of paper.

My leather case now dusty and so empty she laughed and said goodbye.

I walked away and could hear her voice. "Hello, welcome to Wal-Mart."
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