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by AlanF Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Romance/Love · #1785279
This is first draft.It needs improvement,any help or criticisms welcomed.Thanks in advanve
I remember the first time I saw you,
I remember our first kiss,
I remember our first night together,
I remember the day you walked away,
And I had to say goodbye forever.

But now,,,
To be honest I don’t miss you,
Not one bit,
But what I felt,
Thats what kills me.

And after everything,
I now realize that,
The love felt in yesterdays,
Is nothing to the pain felt by tomorrows.
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