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Rated: E · Poetry · Death · #1760872
I feel that this peice is a metaphorical piece, relying on the concept of death...
Redundant and looming
    This articulate death
Dropping by exponential powers that
Seem to retain this...
Abstract dooming
    This superficial earth
Interogating the souls of those
    Lost in the mist
Elightenment entangled
Upon silver strands of mercy
Hope peering through the keyhole
    Of the door to eternity
Transfixed by time and space
Hearts beating at one pace
    In the light of a cosmic face
Feeling the pressure begin to displace
Golden drops of lost memories swirling
    In the stagnant suspension, holding onto
Then releasing those weights of leaden retention
Freed from the grip
    The soul feels one final rip
And ascends into the evermore
Cascading across the space between forever
    And nevermore
In the blink of an eye
as quick as a lightning flash
    These beautiful energies pass
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