Lesson #1 - Writing Assignment

I am a rather shy,(3a) quiet girl. I wanted to take this class because(1) I have a hard time with commas. It is the main thing people (4b)who read my writing(4b) comment on . I've signed(4c) up for other sites and such that encourage me to write. I signed up for a site called 750words.com,(1) and it has encouraged me to write every day.  Right now I am working through the How to Think Sideways course by the great (3b)fantasy writer Holly Lisle. I signed up for How to Revise Your Novel by Holly Lisle(4b) as well (1)so that I would not have to wait for the lessons when I am done with How to Think Sideways.

There are a few other things about me in this next part. I like reading epic fantasy and things about vampires, (1) but I hate the Twilight saga books. The reason I hate Twilight is it feels like she didn't research before writing the novels. I got a free book called Writing Fiction for Dummies via Kindle,(1) and I am debating whether or not to start buying books and a kindle device. Right now,(?) I have computer app for it. I also play three MMOs named World of Warcraft, (?)Lotro, (?)and PWI. I borrow books from the library that(4c) I have trouble returning(1) and end up getting library fines.