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by haless Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ · Poetry · Young Adult · #1673630
This was an assignment for school actually. Its one of my favorite things I've written.
NOTE:: Please tell me what you think.. (: rateee it, comment, knock yourself out!


When she met him
She thought he was "the one",
Not thinking that what they did can't be undone.
She cried for hours
Thinking of a way to tell him.
That night she asked him to meet her
Down by the ocean where they first met.
She needed to tell him what she's been hiding underneath a smile.
They walked for awhile, they talked for awhile,
Remembering the amazing moments they've had together.
Until he asked her,
"What's on your mind?"
She was trying to find the words to say
What she's been hiding night and day.
When the words finally came,
He thought she was the one to blame.
As she was getting ready to brace herself,
He struck her across the face.
She lay there crying her eyes out,
Listening to him shout.
Shout things nobody could even imagine.
Did he feel like a man when he knocked her down?
Did he feel better when she fell to the ground?
For awhile she believed him.
She believed she made the mistake,
And deserved that punch in the face.
She cried alone.
Alone for days.
That's when he swore he loves her.
Thats when she knew for sure,
She's finally had enough.
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