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A comedic outlook on the face of character 'perfection'. |
| [Introduction]
In every universe, the world has it's Mary-Sue, or Gary-Stu; that perfect person that upstages the rest. But the real world is in peril, and the Mary-Sues and Gary-Stu's have been summoned to save our world. But, how will these creative characters function in the real world. Sometimes, their greatest enemy, is each other. Rules: GM, or PP is allowed, for parody purposes. Mary-Sues and Gary-Stu's are not a must, but are recommended. Try to keep your character's universe individual from the others' universes. --- ((Fill out a character profile, and send it to me. I will add it to this section for reference. Starred areas are mandatory)) *Name: *Age: *Sex: *Species: *Occupation: *Universe: ((Can be a rip off from an anime, game, etc. Or can be original.)) *Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: *Appearance: Personality: Powers: Background: Other: *Creator: --- Name: Tenshi Celeste-Angelica-Goddess ((Usually shortened to Tenshi Celeste-Angelica, also known as Blair)) Age: Ageless ((Appears 18)) Sex: Female Species: Angellic Demigod ((1/2 Love goddess, 1/2 Angel.)) Occupation: Flower Shop Owner Universe: #11093 ((Spite Demon Realm)) Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Mary-Sue Appearance: Long, wavy pink hair that reaches her waist, usually tied into pigtails with her bangs hanging down. She has light purple eyes. She's skinny, fair-skinned, and wears a variety of clothing. Her angel wings, which she can hide and bring out at will, are black from the earth's non-angellic atmosphere. Personality: Bubbly, innocent, passionate, nice. Powers: Love powers, perfect aim, infactuation, can change her eye color. Background: Tenshi's parents were the goddess of love and an angel. But one day, her uncle took over heaven and rules as a dark overlord, sending demons of hatred to capture and destroy Tenshi. She's determined to stop him, and she's the only one that can do it. Other: Tenshi has an amazing singing voice, and a special animal companion named Amos. Creator: Mini-Mari --- Name: Keisha Kiba-Neco Age:18 (cat years!!) Sex: a lot ……. (she’s a girl) Species: Penintion Occupation: Warrior princess Universe: Someplace beyond the milky way!! Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Super awesome Mary-Sue Appearance: Keisha has long tiger ears and tail. she is covered in a thick layer of tiger fur, as well as a thick main of hair that falls around her back. Long cat claws on both her fingers and toes Personality: She’s the all-time queen bee, no one messes with her, and she enjoys pissing people off with her gruff attitude! Powers:*breath* Super sexy, super strong, super sexy, Super hearing, super sent, super sexy, super speed, super sight, super sexy, and not to bad at dagger wielding. * wheeze, wheeze, wheeze*. Background: Keisha is the daughter of the great king Monaco, ruler of the large planet of Nixstar. Her planet was attacked by a bunch of evil aliens and she was forced to flee and escape the evil clutches of the bopadupins. It just so happened that she has landed on earth. Other: nothing really Creator: Silver Raven --- Name: Dr. Douglas Walker Age: 34 Sex: Male Species: Human Occupation: Scientist Universe: #1 ((The real world universe)) Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: None Appearance: Tall, thin, and pale. He has a nerdy look, wearing large rounded glasses over his brown eyes and tidely parting his hair off to his left side. He usually wears a baggy overcoat with his pockets always full. Personality: Slightly awkward, with a hit-and-miss sense of humor. He cares deeply for his friends. Sometimes he has his 'cool' moments, but they're short-lived. He's polite, but nerdy. Powers: None. Background: Douglas worked as a scientist ever since he got out of university. He is a great inventor, but always used his talent on small things like solar radios and battery-powered toasters. He's made a theory that every idea is a model of our world and that everytime someone thinks of an idea, an alternate universe is created. So he created the Mary-Sue Gary-Stu attracter, where he could teleport the perfect characters to his world. Other: He's wealthy, though you couldn't tell by looking at him. Creator: Mini-Mari --- Name: Fear Calebrara Age: Immortal (Looks 18) Sex: Male Species: Nicrotermin. (It’s a fancy for mutant.) Occupation: Soldier Universe: Futeristic Earth- year 7510 Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Gary-Stu Appearance: Tall, fit but not excessively manly, sexy chocolate-brown shag, ivory skin, no scares, and a super awesome fashion style! -Black ninja like army wear- Not to mention his awesome dove like wings that turn black when he goes into his demon like state. Personality: Fear likes life on the wild side. You could say he's almost your ultimate cool guy character. He would never hurt anyone innocent, unless your human of course. He likes fighting, and he's damn good at it. Not to mention he's funny and sarcastic! Powers: Fear was blessed with fore epic powers. -Wings -Steal bone-like swords that poke out his wrist. They also explode when you throw them! -Immortality -An epic split personality that turns him into a crazy scyo killer whenever he gets extremely angry. It turns his whole body black, and his eye's red. Background: Fear was born in the time of the gladiator (he's Roman), and lived a somewhat peaceful life among his parents and twin brother Talon. All until his parents where murdered by the Neroes (Humans) and his brother went missing. Ever since, Fear has fought against the Neroes in every war history has to offer. Now, in his present time, the year is 7510. Other: Fear has always had Caylub Denaro as his best friend, although Caylub was never born with immortality. To keep his life long friend alive, he used a charm called 'the shadows heart.' Unfortunately, over the years it's been killing Caylub slowly. Although Caylubs been in pain, he would never tell Fear. Creator: Queen of Hearts (queen_hearts) --- Name: Jake Smith Age: 15 Sex: Male Species: Human Occupation: Student, clean-up boy Universe: our vary own earth. Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Not even close to either. Appearance: Jake has simple brown hair, brown eyes, ordinary cloths, an average build, and not much elts. There really isn't much about him that stands out, in fact there isn't anything. He's not the type that blends into a crowed, but he serenely doesn’t stand out. Personality: He's simple, completely ordinary. He likes just about what everyone likes, dose about what everyone dose, even his marks in school are like everyone else's. He doesn’t really have a hobby or do anything spectacular. He is nice, and his humour isn't incredibly bad either. But other than that, there's nothing in his personality that sticks out. Powers: None. Background: Jake was never the first kid pick in the schoolyard, but he wasn’t ever the last. He’s always been that middle kid, the one that doesn’t even stick out for being the least liked. He has an average amount of friends, average every day home life, and average grades. He doesn’t have anything special about him, nothing. And he hates it. All his life Jake has tried to standout from everyone else, but as fate would have it, he never could. He believes that he will always and forever be the “normal” guy. Other: Jake works after school at Dr. Walker’s lab, cleaning up and other minor things. Creator: queen_hearts --- Name: Kori Falco Age: 15 Sex: Male Species: Frost Harpie Occupation: Ice Prince/ In Hiding Universe: #13253 ((Ice Vs. Fire Universe)) Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Gary Stu Appearance: As a human, Kori is an average size, with always a bit cold, powder white skin. He has ice blue eyes and hair, which is cut short. He wears a strange-looking suit of armour, and an amulet around his neck that is tied into a tight knot. Personality: Kori tries to be polite, but he tends to make more enemies then friends because of his standoffishness. He has a dry, sometimes mean side that only shows when he's intimidated or frusterated. He tends to not think things out before he does them. Powers: -Powers over ice. - Flying - Awesome sword skillz - Ability to talk to birds and other animals. Background: During the great war between fire and ice, the ice kingdom was destroyed, killing all of Kori's family. Managing to escape, Kori made it his duty to avenge his family. Other: Although he has a human form, he is still a bird, so he has very many bird characteristics. Creator: Mini-Mari --- Name: Thanatos Age: Immortal Sex: Male Species: God Occupation: God of Death Universe: Modern World *Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Gary-Stu *Appearance:6,3, well built. Wears black chest plate, black Belt with protective apron, black greaves and wrist guards. Also wears black Roman-style helmet with black crest. His head is a skull, while the rest of his exposed body looks human. Has a pair of black wings on his back. Personality: A selfish, uncaring deity during Classical Greece. Has discovered a softer side within him, although he rarely lets anyone else see it Powers: -Can take or grant life to a soul through touch -Able to summon the beasts of the underworld -Has 'borrowed' Hades' Helmet of Invisibility, which renders the user invisible to the naked eye -wings give him flight -can pass from the underworld to the realm of the living Background: During the Classical Period of Greece, Thanatos worked as an agent of Hades, lord of the underworld. Thanatos' job was to take life from mortals. Although this started with the old and sick, Hades' greed led to Thanatos claiming the life of anyone. With the fall of Olympus, the Greek Gods went into hiding, until the modern day, when renewed belief in their pantheon has given them their powers. Thanatos, tired of serving the selfish Hades, becomes a rogue agent, and is now 'persona non grata' in the underworld. This doesn't stop him from using Hades' world as a transport system to any part of the world. Other: Thanatos has several siblings: Geras (Old Age), Oizys (Suffering), Moros (Doom), Apate (Deception), Momus (Blame), Eris (Strife), Nemesis (Retribution). These all remain agents of Hades, and have made a pact to bring Thanatos back to the fold. Creator: Huntsman_2701 --- Name: Unknown (Referred to as Zena) Age: Just under five hundred years old. (Immortal) Sex: Female Species: Grey Wolf / Fox Occupation: Security Consultant Universe: Animalus Universe Mary-Sue Or Gary-Stu?: Mary-Sue Appearance: Thirty feet tall on hind legs, although she usually moves around on all fours. Although she is half fox half wolf, she looks most like a large grey wolf. Draped over her body is a robe, accessorized with bracelets that she received from her lovers. Personality: Powers: Zena has immortality and can heal at a rapid rate. She is immune to poisons. She has strong powers of telepathy; she is able to manipulate the minds of others, reading their thoughts, making them hallucinate, and able to understand the value of another's speech (understands foreign languages.) She can swallow things greater then her, and can move and stretch her internal organs.Lastly, she has amazing strength and intellect to pick up on things quickly. Background: Born to a loving wolf (mother) and fox (father) couple, with two fox like sisters, the girl, who would one day be called Zena, took after her mother, and looked like a large grey wolf. From the time that she was born, to the time that she was eight years old, she lived near the town of Snow City, a place that was up in the mountians where it snowed for half of the year, with four months of rain, that was split by two months of sun. Had things contenued on as they were, all that would have been known was that the girl was the daughter of the then mayor of Snow City, and that she grew up, and died there. However, fate had different plans for her. Other: Zena is bisexual, having a preference for women. Creator: BBWolf |
| "Someone help me!" The desperate cries of a young girl came from the clutches of a large, olive-skinned, humanic monster. In it's large clawed hand, a girl was constricted in it's deadly grip. Her brown curls brushed against the monster's fingers as she frantically searched the streets for someone to save her. It was a long way down, a few hundred feet. Her hazel eyes were wide. "Help!" She let out a scream of pain as the monster tightened his grip on her. "Shut up, you don't want me to crush you." It's ugly, yellow gaze was fixated on her, as it's bright white teeth grinned behind it's gaped mouth. She found herself wrapped in it's foul breath. "S-someone..." Her voice was suddenly weak as she felt herself being drained of energy, as if it was squeezing it out of her. Her eyes drooped as the monster opened it's mouth wider. "Hm, you look tasty, maybe I'll give you a taste..." It looked curious, pulling her closer. "...Help..." She braced herself for death, closing her eyes tightly as she felt adrenaline course through her veins. But something was different. She was falling. Oh no, she was falling! Wait. She opened her eyes slightly to find herself wrapped in what seemed to be an angel's arms. She looked up to see a young woman carrying her light body. Light pink waterfall curls reaching her waist in pigtails. Her violet gaze looked over to her. "Sadie, are you OK?" She asked, her voice panicked, and full of concern. "Y-yeah..." Her face turned slightly red, then paused. "Good." She smiled, thankful. She turned to the monster, staring up at it. She was dressed in a tight long-sleeved red shirt, and a short pink, ruffled skirt. Gold belts wrapped around her body, holding a silver rapier and a quiver of hearted arrows. Underneath her shoulder-covering armour, a set of dark, black wings stretched out defensively, seperating Sadie from the monster. "Wait, how do you know..." Sadie stopped herself. The angel's face was stern as she looked over at the monster. "Foul creature of spite!" She began, "On such a day as this, how dare you do harm to a young flower in bloom. I am Tenshi Celeste-Angelica, daughter of love goddess Amoena Celeste and angel Lilum Angelica! I will purify you're damned body and restore proper order to earth and heaven as it is intended, regardless of Overlord Ignose." "Tenshi Celeste-Angelica..." Sadie echoed quietly. The monster cackled and howled, "So you're Tenshi Celeste-Angelica. I knew I could lure you out this way! Now I can destroy you for King Ignose!" It looked amused, then looked over. "M-my hand!" It stammered, glaring over to Tenshi, "I'll kill you!" She easily avoided his strike at her as he slammed his fist into the street. She flew over and around him, seeing what seemed to be a blue gem infused at the back of his head. 'Bingo,' She thought, drawing back an arrow and aiming for it. "With Cupid's arrow, I will purge your body of evil, and return you to your true form!" She shot the arrow, hitting the monster square in the back of the jewel. It let out a painful scream, decomposing into a swarm of black confetti, leaving an unconcious human laying on the street in it's place. Sadie watched in amazement as Tenshi flew away. --- "Blair! Blair!" Sadie called energetically as she ran into Blair's Flower Boutique. "Right here, Sadie." Blair giggled, standing at the counter. Her curly pink hair tied into a tight bun and wearing small glasses over her purple eyes. She stepped out from behind the counter to greet Sadie properly. "I'm guessing you're not here for roses." Blair joked, smiling sweetly. She wore a bright yellow apron over a neutral colored dress. Sadie then told Blair about her day and how she was rescued. "Wow, that's quite a story." Blair smiled. --- Blair sat alongside the bright grass, darkened by the indigo sky, her eyes staring up at the stars. "Tenshi, is something wrong?" A small creature crawled out of her bag, looking up at her with beady black eyes. "Oh Amos, why can't I tell her?" Blair asked the creature, who shook his head in responce. "That's the way of things, Tenshi, I'm sorry. But it will endanger your safety." He explained. "I know, but..." She sighed, "Nevermind..." After a moment, Tenshi looked thoughtful. "Amos, do you think aliens exist?" She asked, fairly spontaneous about it. "Sure, why not?" He responded. |
| Kasha closed her eyes as the shuttle was pulled into a strange orbit. The thin metal walls shuck under the new gravities it was forced to injure. The small ship was never meant for this kind of travel. "I hate this!" She hissed, "First I'm forced to run away from thus idiotic aliens, and now my ship has a malfunction. I hate this!!" Kasha pulled up hard on the steering wheel, avoiding one of the largest stars she had ever seen. It's fiery blaze was so intense that it began to melt the engines. They began to crack violently, forcing the shuttle forward. "There’s no way I'm dieing yet!" She hissed. Suddenly after passing a small orange planet she began to pick up speed. Looking out the window, the young warrior saw a small green planet covered in oceans and stars. She yelped as she realized she was on a crash coarse toward it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Flames surrounded the small craft as it careened towards one of the small patches of green and stars. Sidelights and other space derby bumping the sides violently. She was forced so far back into her chair that it was hard to breath, not to mention the oxygen level was almost gone. Suddenly there was an ear shattering crash. Kasha felt herself fly forward warm light hit her fur, as she was thrown out of the shuttle and into a new world. There was a loud crack as her head hit the side of a brick building. --------------------------------------------- (Super Yea- My first post, sorry for taking so long!) |
| Douglas adjusted the glasses on his nose, brown eyes enlarged by the convex lenses, and placed his hands into his coat pockets, hiding the wristwatch on his left wrist. "Alright, I think I know what went wrong..." He said confidently, his eyes sparkling with the rare energy of a static charge. Although he was talking to his cleaning boy, Jake, it sounded more like he was lamenting upon it. His tone unsure. Jake stood there, holding a mop, and glancing over to Douglas. "You do?" Jake asked, half pretending to be interested, half not. "Yes, the problem simply is..." Out of one of his large coat pockets, he pulled out a small chip. "This!" He remarked proudly, smiling awkwardly at Jake. It wasn't unusual for Douglas to carry random parts in his pockets. In fact, it was unusual if he didn't have what he was looking for in his pockets. "So you can fix it right away, and try again?" Jake asked, gaining interest. "Well, no, not really." Douglas admitted sheepishly, "I need to find where I can apply it first. My original design didn't have one..." Jake held back a sigh, "So, what are you working on anyways, Doctor?" Douglas' eyes lit up once again. "I'm glad you asked, my boy!" He began as Jake went back to cleaning. "What I'm constructing here, is a machine that can extract protons from atoms." He announced proudly. "Oh, cool?" Jake looked over to another machine, "And that?" He asked. "That..." Douglas squinted as if he was trying to remember, "Is... Oh! Yeah, that is a multi-universe transporter. With it, you can transport people from other universes here, and vice versa." "Really?" Jake smiled a bit, "Actually, that's pretty cool. Can we try it?" "Why?I already know it works."Douglas muttered, honestly confused. He took out his arm and checked his watch. "It's getting late, you should probably get going soon." He dismissed. |
| Kasha blinked in confusion, The world around her seemed blurry. There was yelling, but the words seemed to blur together in a great mass of sounds. It was a strange sing song language, it sounded quite nice when people weren’t screaming. Kasha lifted her head up, it ached in pain, not to far from her some hairless monkeys’ crowded around her space ship, she tried to yell out and stop them but she only managed to faint again. She was covered by a thick blackness void of any sound. 'Is this really it, I fought so hard and so long only to die on furan shores.' She thought. Kasha's eye's slowly blinked open, she yelled out as a young monkey stood over her. It screeched and backed up against the wall, muttering something in his sing song voice. "What are you saying speak up!" she hissed. The boy simply whimpered. she reached up to scratch her head. Kasha froze as her claw brushed a bandage. it was lightly wrapped around her head. "You... did you save me?" she said pointing at the bandage. The young boy nodded, understanding the jester. (I'll make a bio for Timmy later.) |
| "Mother!" Talon yelled in excitement. He pushed past Fear, a wide spread smile on his face. Fear glanced around peacefully. He watched as his brother flipped aside the stripped curtain that hung in the doorway of there home. "Mother, mother look what we did." He squealed happily, holding up a bag of gold coins. Fear slowly followed after him. The home seemed like a blur to him, beautifully decorated pots lay down besides hanging cloth murals. Learning books and used clothing scattered dormant on the floors. Fear inhaled at the sight of his mother. She stood in the middle of the room, a white cotton robe hugging at her slender frame. She almost looked like a goddess, her ivory skin glowing in the midday light. She placed a hand on Talons head gently, glancing from him to Fear. “What is it that has you all excited Talon?” She asked pleasantly. Fear squinted, trying to focus on her features. He couldn’t make out her face, had he forgotten his own mothers face? “We won! Fearo entered the coliseum just like father said to, and he won! But I helped mom, I helped.” He insisted, he reached forward and gave her a small hug. She just smiled sweetly. “And how did you win?” It was a mans voice, deep and strong. The boys’ father stepped through the curtain door, a smug look on his face. Talon turned, excitement still flowing through him. “Fear used his powers! It was so amazing father.” Silence entered the room. A dry, empty silence that seemed to quiet even the mighty wind outside. Their father stood rigid, his face cold and blank. Talon turned to fear, a pleading look on his face. “No boys…” Their mother whispered. “No fear how could you.” “But mum, I… I only wanted to win…” That’s when it began. In only a matter of seconds, Fear felt his arms confined behind him. He watched helpless as many men dressed in Nero armour stormed in, swords raised in the air. His world went red as he listened to the roar of the men, and the screaming of his family. “Mother! Mother no!” He struggled to get away, but the mans grip was far too tight. Helplessly he watched as his family was murdered. He screamed out in pain as his mother’s body fell limp to the floor. Terror shattered his body when his father was shoved into the A.I chamber, repeated spikes stabbing into him. And then there was Talon. Fear tried to get free, to get to him. But all he could do was yell out his brother’s name as he was pushed further into the strange dresser like container. Talon was being carried under the arm of one of the burly neros, his hands outstretched to his twin. “Fear,” he screamed tears running down his face as his head was shoved into the box. “Fear please don’t let them kill me, please! Please!” He couldn’t do any thing. He twisted his body, thrashed his wings, and kicked his legs. He couldn’t do anything but watch as the lid was closed tightly shut. “Talon!” He screamed over and over again. Tears ran down his face, slowly dropping off his chin. “Fear, Fear stop. Listen to me, your fine, just open your eyes.” The voice seemed to come from nowhere. It was calm and confident and echoed through Fear’s mind. It was a familiar voice, one that fear new well. But who was it? “Get up fear, c’mon.” The voice echoed again. Fear watched his surroundings blur around him, turning into a black void of nothing. His mother’s faceless body puffing away in a cloud of smoke. Fear sat up quickly, his eyes red from tears. He was in his room, decorated with guns and metals. Caylub sat in a chair beside the bed, a worried look on his face. “It was just a dream Fear.” He said, laying a soothing hand on Fear’s shoulder. “Just take a deep breathe.” Fear sat quiet for a long time, drowning out his anger. He could feel his anger trying to overtake him. Although with Caylub being there it was easier to resist. Caylub had always been his friend, ever since they meet in Rome all those years ago. Caylub had always been there to help with his anger problem, although he hardly needed the help anymore. He had learned that with time and deep breathing, the anger would go away. “What happened?” Caylub asked in less than a whisper. Fear turned to him confused. “What?” “In your dream…” He answered, pushing his grey rimmed glasses farther onto his face. Fear just scoffed. He looked to Caylub peacefully, remembering his mother’s presence in the dream. “Rome…” He said confidently. “But it was just a dream.” Caylub nodded. The two men sat silently for a moment, lamenting on years gone past. “I hate Neros’. More than anything Caylub.” Fear said distastefully, his hands balled into fist. “Well that’s why we’ve been at war with them for almost 7000 years or so. C’mon, we gotta eat and then pack up.” He sat up and motioned to the door with his hand. Fear smiled. “I’m not cooking, lets go get burgers.” Caylub stuck out his tongue. “Burgers first thing in the mourning, that’s disgusting.” Both men laughed. |
| The snow crunched under Kori’s feet as he slowly stepped through the blizzard of the icy wasteland that was once his home. Cold wind nipped icily against his already freezing skin, which was as white as the snow around him. He wasn’t aware of how long he had been walking. Hours? Weeks? Even months wouldn’t have surprised him at this point. His breath made a light wisp as he panted against the force of the snow storm, merciless against him. He wasn’t yet used to his human form, and wasn’t aware if his feet would carry him much farther. His calves were tight and sore with a pulling sensation on the muscle. He had to stop somewhere. Heavily swinging his sword from side to side, he made his way towards what seemed to be a small cavern in the mountains of ice that were scattered through his land. Weakly, he managed to carry himself inside, the freezing wind now blocked by walls of ice. Kori couldn’t remove his heavy armor; without it, his fleshy body would be vulnerable to any attackers. Sitting up against an inner wall of the large cavern, he rested his sword in a patch of snow against the ice flooring. He felt his eyelids droop wearily over his platinum-blue eyes as fatigue caught up with him. He glanced down at the locket around his thin neck, thinking about taking it off, although, ultimately, he couldn’t. He would keep his promise to keep it on, so that he could escape into the human crowd. Slaves, he thought to himself, obeying their ruler’s every word. Surely, Kori wouldn’t be like that, not to the fire kingdom. Not to those damn phoenixes. But he would keep it on, for mother’s sake. But who knew how long it would protect him. If anyone spotted the amulet, there’d be no doubt they’d put two and two together. It wasn’t new technology, nothing mysterious. “Without the frost harpies… this land is in chaos…” His voice was soft, higher than a typical human, with a melodic, yet serious tone. He sadly thought about his home. He wasn’t certain, but he was under the impression he was the last one; the last frost harpy. He had heard of other groups in the mountains, but never had he proved the legend. Sighing, he gave into his fatigue and fell into a light sleep, surrendering to the harshness of his land, and to the fight to escape his home. |
| Meanwhile, on Planet Animalus, a fight was raging between the Wild Beasts and one of the various outlaw groups on the planet. "I'll never get why these groups don't just surrender," a human officer said, smashing the butt of a rifle into the face of one of the outlaws. "I mean when the Commander is fighting them in person they should just give up." "I've wondered that myself rookie," a tiger officer responded, slashing the throat of yet another outlaw. "But then I concentrate on my job and that's protecting the civilians. Let the Commander take care of the big boys and anyone else who tries to protect them or attack her. I'll settle for the occasional small fry that tries to attack us. If Zena has things her way most of these guys will end up in her stomach, one way or another." "Yah, I almost pity those who mess with her," said a crocodile officer as he spat out the chewed up body of a third outlaw from his mouth. "Almost." ****** Zena meanwhile was strangling the leader of the group, a large fifty foot rattlesnake. "I hope that you spend an Eternity in Digestion for what you've done," she said, in a hoarse voice. "For killing my partner I'm not going to even bother taking your carcass to court so that you can be judged and executed for it. No, I'm going to do it right here" With that, Zena bit into the man's throat and pulled her head back, tearing the flesh off. She then spat it out and repeated the entire operation, until she got to the windpipe and jugular. It was but the work of one more quick bite, and the rattlesnake's blood was pumping out of him in a fountain, covering Zena in his blood. She the looked at the other outlaws, most of which decided to run away. Those still there seemed to be caught between wanting to fight and wanting to run away. She then licked her blood covered lips and started coming towards them, a dangerous red glem in her eyes. This was more than enough to cause them to run. "I think that's all of them," the crocodile officer said. "I think that Officer Rico's death has been avenged ten times over if not more." "I guess so," Zena said, her eyes becoming an emerald green. She then looked at a young man laying on the ground. There were two puncture marks in his chest, one piercing his heart. Walking over to him, she saw how young he was, not even thirty. "May the Judgement Beasts send your soul to Paridice soon," She said, closing his eyes for the last time. She then looked at the others and said, "Burn the bodies of these murdering scum so that the Death Plant doesn't grow here. I'm going to go and give Rico a private funeral" "Yes Commander," the crocodile said. He then turned to the others and started barking out orders so that the bodies of the outlaws would be taken care of. Zena gently picked up the body of the young officer, stood on her back legs, showing off her thirty foot hight, and carried the figile bundle as one would carry a child. She then went to a clearing, dug a trench, filled it with wood, and started a fire. As she sat back, she looked at the body of the officer. "For one so young you were braver than the rest of us," she said. "When you saw those men raping those women, you charged after them, with no thought of your own safety. I only wish that I'd gotten to you before that bastard sank his fangs into you, but I paid him back for you kid, so you just rest easy. After all, I'm sure that there's someone waiting for you in Paridice, just like I will when it is my time." Zena then looked back at the fire and saw that it was ready for what was to come next. She then took the clothes off of the deceased officer and gently placed him into the pit. She then put in some more wood, and carefully watched as the body was cooked. When it was ready, she took it out, and watched it cool. Then she said in preyer, "Judgement Beasts, Officer Rico Horenza was a fine man. He leaves behind a wife and two children. I won't say that he was perfect, as I'm sure he had his faults, as do we all, but He is one of the bravest men that I know. I hope that, when you sentance him to serve in Digestian that it won't be for long, for he is one man worthy of Paridice. Thank you and Amen." With that, Zena carefully carried out the traditional funerearlly procedure of Animalus, which was to carefully, and with compleat respect, eat the body. While most people on most worlds would call the practice barbaric, such practices were necesary, as the Death Plant grew over the remains of dead animals, and produced a toxic gas. With the body of the young officer inside of her stomach, Zena picked up the young man's uniform and was about to fold it up when all of a sudden, a white light envelpoed her, and she found herself someplace totally unknown to her, but she had a strange feeling. "Where am I?" she wondered. "I've never been here before, and yet, this place, it seems so, familliar." |
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