Walk softly so that you will hear the sounds and find an awakening. (Form: Archimedes Pi) |
Vision Quest The smoke rises, pungent, cleansing body and mind. Naked, alone, I tread the highest peaks seeking a sign, listening for the Great Spirit's voice. I wait patiently, circling, at sunrise and sunset, holy ground sanctified by pine, sage, and generations of ritual that cry out in my blood. Brother Eagle provides illumination; Brother Wolf teaches adaptability. The wind quietly whispers the secrets of the four harmonies. My quest completed, my journey begins. An entry for "N.A. First Peoples' Form Poetry Contest" [13+] Prompt: Image; Native American Theme Only Form: Archimedes Pi form is based on his estimate of the value of Pi from the OED (1841) as 3.14286. The form is: line 1: 3 words; line 2: 1 word; line 3: 4 words; line 4: 2 words; line 5: 8 words; line 6: 6 words. Thank you for the gift of your time. Please, if you're going to rate, leave a comment. Come to think of it - you're here now so leave a comment. Criticisms, thoughts, reactions, yes – even words of encouragement or praise – are all equally welcome. Ken |