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Rated: 18+ · Fiction · Young Adult · #1605378
Fiction story of a guy having his hands trampled by people in a concert.
I went to a concert at a stadium and decided to have something to drink at a bar underneath the seats.



After I finished my drink, I went to a dark place where hopefully I will have my hand stepped on by random people.



Right above me is a guy with brown Nike hiking boots.



As if he was sat, he was leaning on his toes. I soon put my hands under his heels.



His worn soles just touched my hand at a light pressure.



Then the band played a song that made everybody dance. This guy stood up and started to move along the music. The place was packed, so he stayed in place, just moving his legs and making small stomps in my hand. It was great! Feeling his soles digging on my flesh mercilessly… It took all the music, about 5 minutes.



Then I left that place and decided to go to another dark walkway where people move from seats to bathroom and concessions. It was also packed and full of waste on the floor, perfect! Nobody will notice my hand on the floor!



So I put it in there. I saw a dirty Adidas Tuscany on the way to my hand.

Crunch! I felt the massive weight. It was soon replaced by a pink chuck Taylor. Then a combat boot, a black Reebok RBK basketball sneaker and a dirty very worn chuck Taylor.



The place was getting very full, so people couldn’t move. 



A very hot pair of blue and yellow Shox turbo came to my poor hand.The guy could not move, so he stayed on my hand for a while. He even went on his toes, trying to see a way out, but no help. As he left, his friend stepped on my fingers with his timberland hiking boots. He shifted his weight from one foot to other, adding pressure on my hand and releasing it. He them moved forward and put his sole on my hand. His sole was a bit sticky from the grime on the floor and he was cursing about that.



Next was a girl in a blue and silver Shox. She was way easier to cope, due to being light, but she moved in very direction on my hand though. Her boyfriend put his sliver and black Shox monsterright beside her feet, so I felt a huge pressure now; I could even see his Shox columns adjusting to my hand. They started to swing along the music, so they stepped in several spots on my hand. It was painful, even more because I was trapped, could not even move my hand under their feet.



Line has moved a bit and I had a quick break. But not for long. My hand got crushed by a huge red puma racing sneaker. It must be size 13 at least. And the guy must have been tall, muscular or big, due to the heavy impact my hand suffered.  He moved from toes to heel, so it became even heavier. As his soles were thin, I could feel his toes moving in his sneakers. He left after a few painful minutes.



After that guy, a girl came in white Reebok classic aerobic sneakers. She was bouncing with the music but, as if her soles were worn and she was thin, it didn’t hurt.



The line started to move so, next one was a black and flame low cut vans. The guy stepped on my hand very quickly, soon followed by his friend, with beat up combat boots which heel hit squarely on my hand and left.



The concert was almost over and my hand was dirty and scuffed. I decided to leave home and remember that great concert!

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