An allegorical narrative, free verse poem-- Can you find the hidden meaning? |
Down The Road We Live Like rockets sped my kids, up way ahead on bikes Out of breath, behind in pace I hiked Until they stopped a moment to look back And waited, eager for exploring Bikes set to rest, we turned and walked On a road, dirt and overgrown That disappeared in matted khaki-colored mounds Our knees lifted high in uneven stepping Partially buried among dead brush, A softball! White on top and yellowed from the ground, Still hard, still round and everlasting As if they walked away, just left it all as was Like a man passed on who leaves his things behind. On weeds bowed and dried where green shoots peaked, We found the fossil still remaining A hearty gust howled through A concession stand decrepit With no door, a rotted floor, And a window, still inviting A game forfeited Void of losers Six team benches, overturned With no players out there winning Three fields, wide with sturdy steel fences Rearing missing home plate markers, Protecting tall abandoned bleachers Still waiting for spectators willing To sit in wonder of once-played games On the old ball fields, Where the long-ago words of a coach Still on the wind are carried, still encouraging Authors note: Allegories are narrative poems which are an extended metaphor, symbolic of an underlying meaning. In this poem, I used the story of the visit to the abandoned softball fields as a metaphor for the marks our lives leave in the world, for the legacies we leave behind after death. |