Redundant Reduncancy Removed

1. The thief returned back to the scene of the crime.

The thief revisited the crime scene.

2. The large giant was sleeping.

The giant slept.

3. The cold ice kept the drink cold.

Ice kept the drink cold.

4. He passed his English class by a slender, narrow margin.

He passed English by a narrow margin.

5. The final outcome of the study will help explain various different links

between the three separate factors of heart disease, age, and physical activity.

The study will explain the three factors linking heart disease, age, and physical activity.

6. My nephew was suspended from school because of his behavior and conduct in class.

The school suspended my boisterous, rude nephew.

7. Nancy is wearing a blue colored dress that looks smaller in size than it should.

Nancy’s blue dress is too small.

8. Insofar as learning to play a musical instrument is concerned, the piano, in my personal opinion, would be in the category of the kind that is difficult to learn to play.

I consider the piano a difficult instrument to learn.

9. It is a fact that there are many individuals who do not vote in elections.

Many people do not vote.

10. The judge, who is a known expert in the field of labour discussions, recommended that each chairman of both sides meet with him tomorrow morning at 10am.

The judge will meet tomorrow with each chairmen in the labor discussion.

The judge will meet tomorrow at 10 a.m. with both chairmen in the labor discussion.

11. Although they were few in number, the early settlers who came to America brought with them strong and loyal religious faith and beliefs.

The earliest American settlers brought a strong religious faith.

12. The average worker who works in a surrounding environment that contains poisonous pollutants sometimes dies of a mortal illness connected with the pollutants.

Those who work in polluted environments may pay with their lives.

13. He has a wide nose and a large head. He had a thick chest and stick legs. He was a big kid.

The boy was big, but had stick legs.

Everything about the boy was large except his stick legs.

14. "Hey Jimmy, hurry up!" Linda shouted. "It's almost 2 pm, in the afternoon, and we have a lot of work to do."

“Hurry up, Jimmy!” said Linda. “It’s 2:00 and we have lots of work left.”

15. The big, large book was eaten by the ugly, disgusting monster

The huge book was eaten by the monster.

16. The dog danced on its hind legs in a round circle and I thought it was a very unique trick.

I thought the dog dancing on hind legs unique.

17. After listening to the lecture Dan had a complete and total understanding of the subject.

The lecture helped Dan to understand the subject.

18. Our teacher put us in groups and told us to cooperate together on the project.

Our teacher assigned cooperative groups to work on the project.

19. Then our teacher told us that it was extremely crucial to finish the project by the deadline.

The teacher said, “Finishing the project on time is crucial.”

The teacher said that it was crucial to finish the project by the deadline.

20. The group I'm in met in the Library to come up with a plan and scheme for the project.

My group met in the library to decide on a plan.

21. In the event that a large-scale disaster such as a hurricane or earthquake occurred, the possibility exists that even large hospitals could be overwhelmed.

Large-scale disasters may overwhelm all the hospitals.

22. Caught in a lie, Sam dropped down his head in shame.

Caught in a lie, Sam dropped his head in shame.

23. One of my most trusted and respected personal friends who lives in the city of London at the moment is considering moving to Ireland because he has been offered a position in that area.

My closest friend who lives in London is considering taking a job in Ireland.

One of my friends who lives in London is considering relocating to Ireland for a new job.

24. "Hey!" Tommy exclaimed.

“Hey!” Tommy said.

25. My favorite part of the movie was when the building suddenly exploded.

The exploding building was my favorite part of the movie.

27. Jenny and Rick skated across the frozen ice holding hands together.

Jenny and Rick held hands as they skated across the ice.

28. Mr. Jones commutes by train back and forth to the city during the week.

Mr. Jones commutes by train to the city during the week.

29. Lisa smiled and raised up from the chair.

Smiling, Lisa arose from the chair.
Smiling, Lisa got out of the chair.

30. Joey ordered the parts and components for his car from Ebay.

Joey ordered his car parts from Ebay.