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Rated: 13+ · Short Story · Death · #1463513
How to end it
I had always been in charge of cleaning up the bathroom, it had been one of my chore. So I thought that would be the perfect place for them to find me. I had it all planned out. My mom was going out to go get a few things so I would do it then. I had made the sign and everything. I wasn't doing this to get back at them, no, I was just sick and tired of myself, that's what it was.
My mother came in and told me she was leaving, we said goodbye and once she left I got all the things ready, I put the sign on the front of the bathroom door when the phone rang. I answered the phone and heard my mom say, "Kelly, can you clean the bathroom while I'm gone?" This is too perfect I thought. "Okay I answered. When we hung up I got back to work. If I was going to be gone, why not make it a dramatic ending
When everything was set up I got the knife, carved what I needed, then...this was it...I got the gun, took a breath, and realized I was finally relaxed and satisfied for the first time, and I did it.

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When Mother got home she looked for her daughter, Kelly, to see if she had cleaned the bathroom or not. When she couldn't find her she decided to look in the bathroom herself to make sure it was clean. When she got to the bathroom she noticed a sign on the front that said:
HAVE FUN CLEANING THE BATHROOM
Still wondering what that meant, she opened the door and was shocked to find her daughter lying on the groud in a puddle of blood. On the mirror there was blood spelling out:
I got sick and tired of everything
The mother, still shocked ran out of the bathroom not sure what she was doing. It was over.
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