Bazooka

These stories are about Dalton and his Grandpa Ed. The characters are VERY loosely based on my own son and father; but the tales are completely made-up. I'd like to develop this into a series of "stand-alone" tales and maybe publish them someday. Any feedback would be GREATLY appreciated.

Please be honest when reviewing. If ya think it's awful let me know what turned you off. If ya liked it, tell me what sold you on it. Thanks.