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Rated: E · Poetry · Emotional · #1409321
This is a poem I wrote when i was young, it was my first poem I ever wrote.
I'm running running running still,
letting those tears from my eyes spill
My heart is aching for it is breaking.
I run right through the rain
I'm running just to end the pain.
a pain unbearable not strong am I.
I feel like I should have died.
I'm running running running still,
letting those tears from my eyes spill...


This was my first poem I ever wrote I worked for days on it and when I was done I believed I had found my true calling... I hope you like it please critique my work I love to know what people think of my work...
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