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Rated: E · Poetry · Environment · #1405533
A poem of the beach. First time poem, please comment on what I did right/wrong.
It was the perfect night on the beach; dark, clam, and clear. Mellow sounds of the waves crashing ashore with the glimmer of the moonlight reflecting upon me. Gentle breeze of the wind allows me to taste and feel the sea. Warmth of the sand fills me with bliss. Staring at countless stars, countless flashes, countless twinkles. Twinkles of the stars fill my heart with joy and puts a twinkle in my eye. The Moons rays gaze upon me to watch over me. The brightness of this full moon allows me to see its ever so magnificent craters. Star light and moon light make my day so bright; sadly this is all a dream.
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