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Rated: E · Other · Comedy · #1028429
Bah. Limmerick and supposed to be limmerick.
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Carved by cruel steel
Jagged teeth unseal
Candle’s light
Peel back the night
Jack’s own shadow’s reel

He stole away my wife
Teeth drawing out her strife
But waited late
And dawn his fate
Compost his lot in life
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