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-- Mickey Spillane
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THE RELATIVE POSITION OF THE READER
When a reader interacts with your story, they are in one of three relative positions to the characters in the story. They can be:
 Ahead of the characters
Behind the characters
On pace with the characters
Each one of these relative positions offers opportunities and drawbacks for your narrative.
AHEAD OF THE CHARACTERS
When the reader is ahead of the characters, the reader knows something characters don't. This can be a very effective perspective for thrillers, because the author can create anxiety in the reader by showing them exactly what's waiting for the characters just around the corner. This type of story is great when you have a multiple storylines going (particularly when you're showing both the protagonist and the antagonist working toward their respective goals), or when you want the reader to clearly understand what's at stake in the story (e.g., the fate of the world, the stability of the government, the freedom of a wrongfully convicted person, etc.) even if the characters don't quite fully grasp the full scope of the plot yet.
BEHIND THE CHARACTERS
When the reader is behind the characters, the characters know something the reader doesn't. In my humble opinion, this is one of the most difficult perspectives to write because it requires the reader trusting that the characters will eventually explain the information to them. Sherlock Holmes tales are a great example of this type of storytelling where the reader is essentially waiting until the end for the titular character to say, "Okay, here's how I solved the case." These type of stories can be incredibly engaging for people who like seeing an author weave a complex tale and put a puzzle together at the very end, but it requires a deft hand to keep the reader interested rather than frustrated when the characters and narratives are always a few steps ahead.
ON PACE WITH THE CHARACTERS
When the reader is on pace with the characters, the characters and reader discover the same things at the same time. This is effectively used in horror films, where the audience is following the characters down every creepy hallway and around every dark corner. These type of stories are really effectively used in smaller-scale thrillers and mysteries, where the objective is to put your reader in the character's shoes. Unlike big-event thrillers where a lot of the suspense comes from worrying that the protagonist will save the day in time, the suspense and thrills with this perspective come from the reader realizing crucial plot details at the same time as the characters.
When deciding which perspective to take with your story, it will depend on the things you want to accomplish. What's the focus of your story? Is it to have the readers discover clues and solve the mystery alongside your characters? If so, you probably shouldn't undercut that by giving the reader information your character doesn't have, or expect your reader to wait patiently while your characters get to have all the fun of discovery. On the other hand, if your story is about a complicated conspiracy to take down an entire government, you probably want to spend at least some time giving the reader a peek at what the objective is, at least in general terms. It's not much fun to plan a whole heist or takeover if you're only going to explain how it's done in the last chapter of the book! And if your story requires a character that is more advanced than the reader, you probably don't want to spend too much time showing them stumbling through their thought process, or telegraphing the things that the character won't figure out until later.
There is no right or wrong way to position your reader in relation to your characters. But there are three different perspectives you can use, each with their own pros and cons. Figure out the one that's best for your story and stick with it. You don't want to spend too much of the time or space in your story chasing narrative perspectives that undercut what you're trying to do. 
Until next time,
Jeff
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Feedback from my last newsletter about lone wolves and team effort characters ("Mystery Newsletter (August 23, 2017)" ):
Quick-Quill  writes: "I love team effort. I do find some to be narrow minded. I have had three stories shot down in the first chapter. I decided not to give out my work for critique until I have at least 3-4 chapters to read."
I usually recommend authors provide as much of a longer work as possible when asking for feedback. If a reader is only presented with a chapter, or a handful of pages, they can only knowledgeably comment on that relatively small excerpt of the whole. And in longer pieces, it's entirely possible their concern is alleviated a while later. This happens all the time with screenwriters. They'll sometimes ask me to read the first ten pages of their script and I'll have a lot of questions about the significance of situations they're setting up, character motivations, etc.
And the answer is often, "Oh well I address that later in the script." But without having that "later" available, a reader can't know that.
Brooke  writes: "What a terrific editorial Jeff. I don't write multiple stories with the same character but I do read stories where that comes into play. I have to say, this is something I hadn't thought about. What a brilliant idea to talk about this. Wonderful editorial. I know I will think about this again when writing and reading. Thanks for taking the time to think of such interesting topics. "
Thanks for writing in, Brooke! It's always great to hear from you! 
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