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"The possession of knowledge does not kill the sense
of wonder and mystery. There is always more mystery."
-- Anaïs Nin
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AGENCIES & ORGANIZATIONS
In mysteries and thriller fiction, it's not uncommon to read about characters working for some kind of agency or organization. From private investigators working for their own firms to government-sanctioned special agents and covert operatives, there's a good chance that writing in this genre means you'll have to give some thought to the place your character works. When it comes to these agencies and organizations, you have three options:
 You can use a real agency/organization;
You can invent a fictional agency/organization; or
You can invent a fictional group within the agency/organization.
Using a real agency/organization.
The easiest thing to do is to create characters that work for existing agencies or organizations. After all, the United States already has the FBI to investigate federal crimes and the CIA to manage intelligence services around the world. Great Britain has the Secret Intelligence Service (MI6), Russia has the Federal Security Service (FSB, formerly KGB), Israel has Mossad, and China has the Ministry of State Security (MSS). Practically every country in the world has a network of agencies and organizations that will probably fit what your character does, so it might make sense to have your character simply work for the CIA, FBI, NSA, DEA, ATF, or any of the other alphabet soup of organizations.
Some examples of properties that use real organizations:
Michael Connelly's Detective Harry Bosch (LAPD)
James Patterson's Alex Cross (Former FBI)
Ian Fleming's James Bond (MI6)
Patricia Cornwell's Kay Scarpetta (Commonwealth of Virginia)
Inventing a fictional agency/organization.
Sometimes it's just easier to invent an entire organization yourself. Perhaps you're worried about portraying the organization accurately, or want more control and specificity, or simply want something that more accurately reflects your interests. In cases like that, you might consider coming up with your own agency or organization.
Some examples of properties that use fictional organizations:
S.H.I.E.L.D., from Marvel's various comic books
N.U.M.A., from Clive Cussler's Dirk Pitt series
CONTROL, from the Get Smart television series
C.O.B.R.A., from the G.I. Joe series
IMF, from the Mission: Impossible series
Inventing a fictional group within a real agency/organization.
This option is the compromise between options number one and two. Perhaps you don't want to go to all the work of creating your own expansive government agency but you want to do something a little more unique than just another FBI or CIA agent. Or maybe you like the fact that a subsection of a real agency lends it a little legitimacy.
Some examples of properties that use fictional groups within real agencies/organizations:
The X-Files, subsection of the FBI in television series of the same name
Third Echelon, subsection of the NSA in Tom Clancy's Splinter Cell video game series
SD-6, purported subsection of the FBI in the Alias television series
Office of Scientific Intelligence, subsection of the CIA in the Bionic Woman and $6 Million Man series
When it comes to which type of organization you choose, there is no right or wrong. Each option has pros and cons; as long as you write your agencies realistically, it's an equally valid choice to use an existing agency, create your own, or create a subsection of a real one. There have been remarkably successful properties that use all three types of agencies and organizations.
Until next time,
Jeff
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Feedback from my last newsletter about understanding your mystery market:
Quick-Quill  writes: You are right on point. What makes a movie or TV show is action and suspense. Whether its a true series like "24" or a series like NCIS in which the crime is solved in a hour its not real. What has happened is the effect its had on the public. When being called to jury, you relate what you hear to TV or movies. "Why can't they sent it to a lab and get the DNA?. Just because in theory it's possible doesn't mean it can actually happen that fast. People don't tell the truth right off when a cop leans on them like they do in movies. There are no Godfathers, ready to break the witness' legs if they talk. In writing you are more free to draw out the story line to give the reader all the thrill of a movie/TV show. The key is adding the spooky music! These is the orchestration of describing setting, fervant looks and whispers. Be the conductor of your novel and give the reader the best experience you can.
Great insights! Thanks for writing in!
willwilcox writes: Thanks for the shout-out Jeff. I'm not much of a mystery writer, but when I can add humor...I'm all over it!
You're very welcome!
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