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For Authors: September 14, 2005 Issue [#614]

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About This Newsletter

He who passively accepts evil is as much involved in it as he who helps to perpetrate it. He who accepts evil without protesting against it is really cooperating with it.

Martin Luther King, Jr.

The ordinary man is involved in action, the hero acts. An immense difference.

Henry Miller




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Fifty-cent Words and the SAT

My daughter asked me to come with her to Starbucks to help her study for the SAT. (And to help pay for the caffeine.) She gave me a pencil and a handout with six pages of vocabulary, and we sat down at a table outside.

As I drilled her on the words, it occurred to me that I could easily use most of them in a sentence, but couldn’t cough up a dictionary-type definition to save my life. Egregious. Erudite. Melancholy. Contentious. Capricious. Where had my brain cells wandered off to?

Among the symptoms of normal memory and aging, according to an article on Alzheimer’s Disease, from USNews.com (http://www.usnews.com/usnews/health/brain/alzheimers/alz.symptoms.normal.htm), is that language comprehension (understanding the rules of language) is preserved as we age, as are vocabulary and one's understanding of syntax--the way in which words are put together. But some modest decline is seen in our ability to dredge up words and in verbal fluency--one's ability to "get the words out."

That’s it. The brain cells holding all the dictionary definitions haven’t wandered off; they’ve just crashed on the cerebral cortex, propped their little feet up, and refuse to get out.

Dilettante. Provocateur. Prevaricator. I handed the sheaf of papers back to my daughter. “Now you drill me.” To oil the mental hinges and increase your vocabulary, you can sign up for a free membership at http://www.rd.com, then click Play Word Power. Or, grab a dictionary. Thumb through it to find five new words. Study their meaning. Write each one in a sentence that demonstrates its meaning. Use all five in a short, short story.

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I live in Houston, Texas. As you may have heard, we just increased our population, almost overnight, by about 240,000 people. We’ve taken in our families, friends, and neighbors from Louisiana, Mississippi, and Alabama who were displaced by Hurricane Katrina. (Will any of us ever again hear the word “aftermath” without immediately thinking “Katrina”?) Like all families in crisis, you do first – and deal with the analyses and consequences later.

There are a lot of things running through my head right now - spaghetti strands of thoughts, impressions, information, facts, opinions – in short, the last two weeks have resulted in a serious information overload. Who’s to blame? Who are the real heroes? Will the welcome mat wear out before everyone’s needs are addressed? Will the Gulf Coast recover, or will an entire culture be scattered to the winds?

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This reminds me of one of the most important things I learned about writing:

Rule Number 1: Nobody does anything without a darn good reason.

Characters have to have a darn good reason for risking their neck and saving the princess from the Dark Lord of the Flock (a black sheep in his family). Otherwise, they'd be content to graze in their little patch of grass while the world falls under his iron hoof.

However, I like Stephen King's advice to forget the characters and plot and focus on the story. If they help the story along, fine. But if they get in the way, it's time to use the Behave Bar on them. I can get you one cheap; it's an iron bar with the words "BEHAVE!" engraved on the side.

One more thing: According to that "Hero's Journey" thing you linked to, the hero sets out on his journey after getting help by a helper and/or a magical talisman. But how many stories are there where the helper *is* the magical talisman?

You make some excellent points. Nothing should get in the way of good storytelling. If spinning a yarn comes naturally, don’t let tools and methodology stand in the way – they’re there to help, not to turn your prose into something stale and formulaic.

And that’s an interesting question – I’m not sure how many stories there are where the helper is the magical talisman, but I’m sure there are quite a few. And why not? – Jessiebelle


Daddy Ziok Author IconMail Icon wrote:

Wow! What an excellent newletter! LOL! This was very informative and about a subject I had been curious about for a while! Thanks for doing such a great job!

Thank you! -- Jessiebelle


Joto-Kai Author IconMail Icon wrote:

If you censor, who gets to decide? And really: if you poison my mind in public, somebody will give me the antidote, but if you poison it in private... The free exchange of ideas is the safest, best way to proceed.

You hit the nail on the head. -- Jessiebelle


shaara wrote:

This was extremely well written. I enjoyed your dialogue, mainly because of your great sense of humor. You caught me, in other words, and I did more than skim. I read EACH word. Thanks for the good input.

Smiles,
Shaara

*Blush* Thanks, Shaara. -- Jessiebelle


nathzie wrote:

Hi, Jessiebelle! Thanks for the motivation article! It was a great help for me who thinks my heroines are getting away with the glory too easy! All they actually need was some goal or some motivation, but of course I didn't know that till I read this newsletter! And your talk on omnipotence reminds me I'd better scan back my heroes and heroines..maybe they went a little too extreme...heheh! Gotta fly! And thanks for getting inside my inbox..this newsletter is the most welcome one inside...
~Blanche~

Thanks, Blanche! Yes, you can’t let your heroes and heroines get away with anything too easily. You want your readers to identify with them, not be green with envy. One reason Jane Eyre is such a well-loved protagonist is that she is, by all accounts, “plain.” But she has endless reserves of character, honesty, and dignity. Scarlett O’Hara, on the other hand, is beautiful but her character is flawed. We can’t help but root for her, and yet…we do want to see her challenged and suffering the consequences of her behavior. A flawless heroine is a boring heroine, because without conflict and challenge, there’s no real story. -- Jessiebelle


PastVoices Author IconMail Icon wrote:

Motivation and heroes packs a double punch. In non-fiction, I don't run across too many heroes without clay feet.

I have had a comment on my blog that pleased me in that the reader was glad I wasn't white-washing the ugly parts along the way!

Another great newsletter dear!
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If you white-wash the “ugly parts,” you remove truth from the equation. In removing truth, you also lose what makes humanity shine, when it rises to its most noble, because you’ve removed the contrast. -- Jessiebelle


spazmom Author IconMail Icon wrote:

I have to admit I wasn't inspired by the beginning of your newsletter on hero's...I mean, I usually am inspired by an actual event that leads me to want to write a story around it, develop it into something else, or elaborate on the situation. Sometimes it's as simple a thing as the people sitting in the food court at a mall. Why are they all there, what are they all thinking? Usually my characters come up with their own stuff...I have found lately though that I do like to flesh them out a little bit... so that if I get lost in what I'm trying to write I can look up the particulars about them. Anyway, good newsletter. Got me thinking.

I used a fictional example, but I think the Hero’s Journey can easily be applied to non-fiction (or realistic fiction) as well. -- Jessiebelle



Excellent topic. I think that the traditional hero doesn't work any more. A larger than life, all out benign and mighty hero has no one rooting for him: what's the point in rooting for someone who will win anyway? The best protagonists--the ones I find myself worrying for--tend to be anti-heroes. They're everymen who, when faced with danger, think about saving themselves before others... but then try to save the others anyway.

Exactly. Courage is not a lack of fear; it’s doing what needs to be done, despite the fear. Or reluctance. -- Jessiebelle



Jessiebelle-Thank you for a very timely topic. It was the magical thingamabob that was tripping me up! This gave me some outside perspective and made me stop trying to shove a round peg into a square hole. Now maybe I can move the story along with out it bogging down. Thank you!

Great! You’re very welcome. -- Jessiebelle


billwilcox wrote:

Jezabel,

Is there anything you don't know about writing? You are the guru of WC and I know it sounds selfish, but I'm going to hate to lose you to literary fame and fortune. When you're one of the rich and famous will you bother to write a newsletter for us hero-wannabees? I think not. The road you travel, the determination, the sheer will, I'm sure,will soon bear fruit for you. I miss you already,
W.D.

Wow, W.D., you make me feel like I’m not living up to my potential. I’m both flattered and ashamed! Flattered by your faith in me, and ashamed I haven’t written anything of serious literary merit to justify it. I hope your predictions are right – if they are, I promise I’ll still “bother” to write newsletters for you “hero-wannabes” if you’ll have me. Provided you promise to thrash me with a wet noodle if I ever proclaim myself “guru” of anything.-- Jessiebelle



Hi Jessiebelle!

Great newsletter--I especially enjoyed "The Quest, or What's My Motivation"? I'm currently plotting a novel, and so far the only thing that's missing is just that: the main character's motivation. Why should he bother? Well, I'll have to figure that out. I keep waiting for him to tell me...

And thank you for using Shrek as an example to illustrate your point--I don't know what it is about that particular example, but it really opened my eyes. Thank you! --Alissa

Here’s a wacky suggestion: You tell your hero what his motivation is. He’ll either go along with you, or he’ll fight you on it. If you wait on him to announce it, he may just sit back and fizzle with inertia. If neither of you can come up with plausible motivation, maybe it’s the wrong character for the right story, or the right character in the wrong story.

I once switched from first person to third in the middle of writing a novel. My thirteen-year-old male protagonist got really snitty about that, until I threatened to give him a really nasty case of acne or write him out of the story entirely. “Cooperate, or be tormented – or worse yet, ignored.” It worked.

Now we’ll know who the real writers are – the rest will write in to say “Y’all need your heads examined.” -- Jessiebelle


Vivian Author IconMail Icon wrote:

Thanks for an interesting and helpful newsletter, Jessie. Two newsletters today have set the stage for an Action/Adventure Newsletter that I'm doing Sept. 7 on heroes/heroines. ~~ Viv

Must be that cosmic subconscious at work again! Thanks, Viv. -- Jessiebelle


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