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Short Stories: January 13, 2010 Issue [#3502]

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Today’s Forecast: Partly Cloudy


And on Thursday morning, the sun shone brightly.

… So? Does this tell me anything about the story? What’s going on with the characters? While there is a place for weather, let your characters interact with their setting to make it real.

Meredith splashed through the puddles, tilting her umbrella to let the rain sprinkle droplets on her face.

The second example employs a showy version of the weather. The character interacts with it, and the action doesn’t stop for a description. This is just another reason why we're not supposed to start our stories like Snoopy: "It was a dark and stormy night."

Dig deeper into the story. Why are you telling your readers about the weather? How does it fit into your story? If it's just a backdrop or a way to tell a transition, you might be better off to figure out a different method. Especially if the sun keeps shining for six days in a row. Your readers might think you're trying to be a meteorologist instead of an author.

One exception is if your story is dependent on the weather. Are you writing about surviving a storm? Are your characters in conflict with their surroundings and can you make the weather a part of that?

Viktor trudged through the snow and clung to the rope that connected the house to the barn to check the animals. The wind whipped at his clothing and burned his exposed face. He was glad he had strung the rope between the buildings, since he couldn't see the barn or the house from his current position because of the storm.

I'd hate to be caught in a storm like that, but it makes for better reading than telling the reader the storm lasted 18 hours and dropped 22 inches of snow on the ground.


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