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Short Stories: March 08, 2023 Issue [#11830]




 This week: Right-Hand Man Trope
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"I just watched so many Westerns as a kid that you end up using archetypes and sort of tropes of that genre, because there's a language there and you can twist it and turn it on its head or play to it or go sideways at any time." - Gore Verbinski


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Right Hand Man Trope


The right-hand man trope is in all actuality a gender-neutral term to define the character who is the most important to a story's main character. As such, the right-hand man is not the leader of the group. Right-hand man is there to take over when the leader is off doing leader things. Often, the right-hand man's job held by the big guy or by the lancer. Both of these have further qualifications in a team, that is why we keep them apart as different tropes.

When the right-hand man is the lancer of a five-man band, then the job consists of providing contrast to the leader. Be it by complementing the leader's skills, or by speaking up against the leader whenever needed. Or whenever the lancer feels like it. When the big guy is the second in command, the role is to be the one who enforces whatever the leader wants enforced. In military fiction, the right-hand man will usually be something akin to a first mate. Someone right below the captain.

Teams can be made up of good guy hero types or bad guy villain types. The role of the second in command is pliable enough to fill either type.

A good guy second in command might be even more ethical than the leader and find ways to make the leader's wishes come to fruition while inserting an extra measure of good guy helpfulness.

The villain second in command can be the final obstacle for a team who wants to reach the evil leader. Once this second in command is overcome, capturing the leader is easier.

One benefit to using the second in command for short stories is that this type of character is easily recognizable. Using this trope saves word count that is needed to advance the plot and story to keep the story short. A lot of actions, opinions, or short amounts of world building backstory can easily be told by inserting small tidbits of the relationship between the leader and the right-hand man.

Have you ever thought of making the second in command the main character?


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Replies to my last Short Stories newsletter "Short Story, Preface, or First Chapter?" Open in new Window. that asked: Have you written any short stories that were really the first chapter of a novel?

Nobody’s Home Author Icon wrote: I'm actually coming at this all backwards. I only ever wrote novels or novellas before coming to WdC, and I've found it an unexpected challenge to write shorter fiction. So yes, I've set aside most of my unfortunate short story attempts to rewrite as longer fiction "later." They might become novels, it depends on my muse. Some of the stories might only need another 5-10K words to flesh out enough to make them feel better about them.

Paul Author Icon wrote: I’m a fan of Tobias Wolfe too. He is a master of short story form and I want to emulate him.
Yeah, I’ve written several good first chapters and many central chapters, but I don’t know how to make them a novel. My problem is I don’t think the idea for the story can carry 75 to 100 thousand words. I don’t have the confidence that I could do it. I may just stick with short form and quit worrying about novels.
Thank you for this post, I enjoyed reading it, as well as many others. This is a marvelous site to have found. I love the way it’s so tightly monitored.

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