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Given: Apr 23, 2025 at 10:43am
Length: 915 Characters |
803 w/o WritingML
Greetings, Phyllis!
I'm here for Stephanie's Honey Pit Challenge I saw this on your features and thought it looked like a nice positive read.
I love the hymnal quality you've given it. Working within the tight requirements of the form might have been rather awkward, but it feels like a quaint old-fashioned piece one might find in Streams in the Desert.
I can't think of anything to advise you on... Seeing it on mobile, I'm unaware of the font size and style. Size 4 Verdana is my favorite, but these days I just say that because I'm at a loss Oh, perhaps an X-link to a page explaining the Rondeau form would be helpful in case we would like to write our own.
This is a beautiful heartfelt poem sharing your faith.
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