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In God's Great Hands Open in new Window. [E]
Rondeau poem celebrating God's powerful love
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Greetings, Phyllis!

I'm here for Stephanie's Honey Pit Challenge *Smile* I saw this on your features and thought it looked like a nice positive read.

I love the hymnal quality you've given it. Working within the tight requirements of the form might have been rather awkward, but it feels like a quaint old-fashioned piece one might find in Streams in the Desert.

I can't think of anything to advise you on... Seeing it on mobile, I'm unaware of the font size and style. Size 4 Verdana is my favorite, but these days I just say that because I'm at a loss *Laugh* Oh, perhaps an X-link to a page explaining the Rondeau form would be helpful in case we would like to write our own.

This is a beautiful heartfelt poem sharing your faith.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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