Dear Kalai ,

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Looking back on life, especially in the 20s, I get the feeling that "time" has not treated you well. To me, the word "sham" means phony or counterfeit. Then you describe yourself as not a sham at all.

My Favorite Part(s)

The realness of this poem, the crying out struck me and resonated with me.

Suggestions/Questions:

Do you still feel this way? Or is this just an artistic expression, such as for a contest? Thank you for sharing.




Sincerely,
AmyJo