Dear 💙 Carly: poems & novel ,

Hi again!

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

Yikes! I feel for Posy. To have your hopes and dreams crushed like that. I want to do violence to Brock and Samantha on Posy's behalf.

My Favorite Part(s)

In under 300 words, you managed to tell an entire tale, of happiness to betrayal. Well done. "You can both go to hell" sums it up nicely.

Suggestions/Questions:

Was this for a contest? I hope it's not based on a true story . I plan on checking in on your writings in the future. Thanks for sharing.




Sincerely,
AmyJo