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 Blues River Tuning Open in new Window. [E]
just some creative thoughts
by WindSpirit3 Author Icon
Review by G. B. Williams Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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WindSpirit3, "Blues River Tuning" made me think of our environment and how important it is to the rest of our lives and the universe. This brief writing reminded me that other life forms are making their own music and doing their own thing, which might just be more like ours than we think. Thanks for sharing.

Why I read it: It was a random selection by writing.com.
What I like: The treatment of the environment and the message it shared
Recommendation(s): Break up each sentence, i.e.,

They all sing the blues! - their version of it at least.

The meadow grasses merge with the sweet(,) cool breeze coming off the chilly creek - at least their branch of style.

I also recommend that you re-read and edit to improve the flow.

These are my suggestions. Please use what you can and disregard the rest.

Write on, WRITE ON!

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