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Fallujah (for Phil) Open in new Window. [E]
For a fallen brother
by Jeffrey Meyer Author Icon
Review by G. B. Williams Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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WOW! Jeffrey Meyer, you nailed that one. Your clever, clear, and compelling use of the hornet's nest to tell the story was a masterstroke. Thank you for sharing the story of a fallen marine who did not get left behind.

Why I read it: It was a random selection by writing.com
What I liked: The analogy of the hornet's nest
Recommendations: None
Changes: None

Write on, WRITE ON!


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