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Review #4807130
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Musings... Open in new Window. [18+]
Writing, scribbling, etc.
by Gaby Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "The Wedding VowsOpen in new Window.
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Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear Gaby Author IconMail Icon ,

Back again. I was drawn to this in your port "Musings"

After reading your work, My impressions are these:

I was curious about the title The Wedding Vows, and wanted to see what it was about. It wasn't what I thought it was going to be - This seems more like a jilting at the altar, and it was a painful read. I could feel the heartbreak and the pain in the once happy bride to be. I couldn't imagine such heartache. Truly, divorce is easier to tolerate than this.


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Is this just an imagining of yours? I hope it isn't based on a true story. Thank you for sharing, even if it wasn't the happiest of writings. Gives someone something to ponder.


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Sincerely,
AmyJo

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