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 A birth announcement limerick Open in new Window. [E]
It is what it says it is: The birth announcement for my 1st grandchild
by Dad Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hey Dad Author IconMail Icon As a grandpapa myself, I can understand your happy, happy mirth! But you need to finish the limerick. One day, he will be grown and might find comfort when you are gone to hold and read something written about him by one of his most loving kin.

Here are a few thoughts that might get your muse thinking:

A Limerick for John Adam Sheneman, the Fourth

I'd like to announce the birth.
Of John Adam Sheneman, the fourth
My Grandson is here!
So it’s abundantly clear,
That my ego is expanding its girth!

This little lad’s finally arrived,
And our family’s joy has revived.
With his tiny hands waving,
And his cute smile engraved,
It’s a moment we’ve long been deprived of.

He’s the fourth to carry the name,
But he’ll make it his own just the same.
With a giggle so sweet,
And those adorable feet,
He’s already winning the game.

As a grandpa, I’m bursting with pride,
With this blessing, I can’t even hide.
He’s my new little buddy,
Though his diapers are muddy,
I’ll cherish each moment, wide-eyed.

So here’s to young John Adam, the fourth,
May his life be filled with endless mirth.
With love all around,
And happiness found,
He’s the greatest gift on this earth!


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