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 | Beneath One Distant Spring  [E] Time to reflect  |
| (5.0)  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"  Hello, Carly! INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:  I enjoyed reading your "Beneath One Distant Spring" poem every time I read it, including today. Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Congratulations to you on completing eight whole years of the Contest Challenge! "The Contest Challenge" MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:  Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I read this "Beneath One Distant Spring" poem of yours sometime in the past (I think the day after you wrote it, as I also entered the Writer's Cramp that day), and enjoyed it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "March" file.  ). I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging. You crafted a beautiful free-verse poem in response to the Writer's Cramp prompt of the day. This would be an excellent poem for any time frame, but being done with crafting such a lovely poem in 24 hours or less is remarkable. I loved the imagery and emotion you weaved throughout your "Beneath One Distant Spring" poem. I thought the free verse format worked well with the message of your poem. My favorite line was "When youth dripped with glorious colour." Lovely! I thought you did a great job with the prompt, and congratulate you on winning the contest. I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your "Beneath One Distant Spring" poem. I appreciated that you included information on the contest, even though I entered it with you, and that you reminded me what the prompt was that day and even linked to the contest itself. Hopefully that will inspire someone new to enter the contest, or remind someone familiar with it to check it out again and enter. I thought the nature, inspirational, and experience genres you selected for this poem were appropriate matches for it. I liked that you included your line count below your poem, and that you it them smaller, so it was obviously not part of the poem.IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER: In the spirit of helpfulness, and because of the requirements of a new reviewing challenge I joined recently, I have one little suggestion to make your piece stronger. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't, no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section. Still reading? You're brave! Yay for you!   It might help you get more future readers if you added a thumbnail picture to your story, if your membership level allows that. Pictures are attention getting and could help your story stand out in a list of search results.As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't. CONCLUSION:  I enjoyed reading your "Beneath One Distant Spring" poem, and empathized with your sentiments that you expressed in it. Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community! Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance during your anniversary month, and always! PWheeler   A SuperPower Reviewers Choice review!   Positive Hearts  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group"  The B.E.A.R. Fund   A Review to Congratulate You on Completing 8 Years of the Contest Challenge!: "The Contest Challenge"   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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