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I am not seeing any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors that are jumping out at me. You could add a picture to help draw potential readers in. Maybe a picture of a drawn machine plan or of medical staff performing an implantation of the device. Even the medical symbol on ambulances would work. The title and description are good.

This device sounds like quite the medical and scientific breakthrough. It is written in a way that this fictional story is very realistic and believable. Great job on that! That isn't an easy task for some of us writers.

Overall, I enjoyed reading your story and look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.



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