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Fifth go around on Promptly Poetry Challenge
by Bunny Sox Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Ode to February" Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sox!

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

The ode to February... Everyone experiences the second month differently. No two poems are alike. I like having a surrealist bent to things, trying not to strike the "same old" notes of seasonal changes and whatnot, which get trite fast.

I love the short, quick lines you have here, with stacked rhymes like a rap. It gives a great rhythm and is fun and unique to read as you move through your feelings about February.

I can never think of anything to suggest (for the Bear Fund) other than Size 4 Verdana font *Laugh* Perhaps a line about something personal to ground the generalized seasonal thoughts? How are the New Year's goals doing, if there were any?

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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