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 Admiring Springtime Flowers  Open in new Window. [E]
Admiring Springtime Flowers in the new American Empire
by JCosmos Author Icon
Review by AmyJo-Spring... Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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My First Impression:

Woah! Talk about a "hook"!

My Favorite Part:

Looks like you followed a prompt, and it went somewhere I didn't expect. Your depiction of the 3 flags, and the new name of "Christian States of North America".

My Suggestions/Final Thoughts:

This writing makes me want to read on, and to have some questions answered. When did this happen? Is it a metaphor along the lines of 1984? Inquiring minds want to know!

*PenO* Write On!!*PenR*


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