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The 'bursting' into being
by Fyn - 20 WDC years old! Author Icon
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Greetings, Fyn!

Don't you hate it when you accidentally send off a rating without a review *Laugh*

I delayed on this one, sitting in my draft reviews page... can't remember why... I have a lot to juggle these days. Anyway, I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge. Happy Account Anniversary!

I love a good nature poem, and this is fantastic. It shares the excitement of looking forward to what the world has to offer, and reminds us of the beautiful cycle of natural life. I love your creative word choices, which are crucial to making a poem "pop." Evoking the image of an hourglass with the single word "sand" is brilliant.

Don't forget to add the prompt info, word count and line count at the bottom for clarity when you go back through your port someday. I see each poem you write for the PPC is a separate item; you may want to consider grouping them into a folder or adding smaller ones to a book item instead.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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