Hello TheBusmanPoet ,

This short poem is as close to perfection as one can come to perfection as a writer here on Writing.Com.

The title is punchy and properly capitalized.
The intro line gives context and is grammatically correct and punctuated correctly.
You chose three Genres that each make perfect sense for the poem.
The thumbnail image is colorful and draws the eye to it, which helps with additional exposure.
The poem is centered and the bold font make it easy to read.

The words in the poem are simple, which is great because that makes it easy to understand. The message is clear and nobody can deny the truth in those words.

Since you added a line and wordcount, I assume that you wrote this for a contest or writing activity at some point. Since this piece is perfect, my one and only suggestion for you would be to add a disclaimer at the bottom as to what contest or which activity got you started writing this piece.



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