Hello Sumojo ,

I came across your poem through the Read & Review function.

The words in the poem make a demure young woman come to life perfectly. Is she like that on the inside also? Nobody can know for sure, but she knows the rules of etiquette and won't be caught uncouth. Although she has allure, which, to me, sounds like she is very much a wild child on the inside, just too clever to show it.

The intro line explains that this poem is to have 24 syllables and include the word Demure. However, you didn't choose any meaningful Genres. "Contest Entry" and "Other" are rather pointless if one were to look for such a poem to read. I suggest you find three Genres that give the poem a little "more."

If you remember the contest, why not add that to the item either at the bottom in a note or at the top in a drop note?



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