Hello Sum1 ,

Read & Review brought me to this piece of micro fiction.

I have to say, the title, intro line, and even the piece itself are rather cryptic. I don't know if you wrote this in response to a contest prompt or if it was something that just crossed your mind.

I suggest you use the intro line to explain how this piece came to be. So, name the contest or the reason for this piece to exists. Right now, the intro line is a shorter version of the whole piece.

I also suggest that you add two better genres. "Religious" kind of adds to the cryptic nature of this piece, but since there is so much rain, the name Noah makes a little bit of sense. The Genre "Contest Entry" shouldn't even exist as a choice, but that's a discussion for another day. I think you should take that one away and choose two more Genres that give context to the text.



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