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I didn't notice any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors. I wonder if perhaps adding a picture of a to do/check list would help draw a potential reader's attention to your poem. Although the title is something we can all relate to. We all have errands to complete. I think laundry and dishes are the tasks that never end, but that's beside the point. It is quite annoying when people add to your to-do list especially when it's already overwhelming you or it is almost done. The frustration is well expressed in this poem.

Overall, a poem that expresses the frustration shared by many other people as well. Great job! I will look forward to reading more of your work in the future.



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