Your article got off to a really interesting start, right off the bat. Someone who judges other people wholly based on their musical tastes is an interesting scenario and you did a good job of getting the reader right into the narrative.

The purpose of the piece was a little unclear due to the way the audience changes. At first it felt like you were talking to an objective third party about this strange relationship you have, but then toward the end it seems to pivot and almost be directed at the individual themselves, then goes back to a more objective, removed point of view. I'd recommend honing the tone and style of the piece a bit to refine the audience you're intending it for.

I'd also recommend a thorough proofread, as there were quite a few typos and grammar errors that caused a hitch in the pace of the read.

Overall, this feels like a very rough and raw piece of writing, but there's some potential here. The scenario you're describing is interesting, and you do a great job of capturing your feelings and emotions about the situation. That's not easy to do and definitely something to build off as you refine the execution.