Hello! I am affiliated with a few different review groups. I am here because of a prompt in Space Blog.

Your title "A Little Sapling" is perfect for this poem. It not only catches the attention but is pleasing to the ears and gives a pleasant vibe. However, the title and description does not give away the entire story. There is just enough information to draw in the curiosity and get your potential reader's attention. Perhaps a picture of a similar sapling would help bring attention to this item also.

When read out loud, this poem is music to the ears. The rhyme and rhythm are just right. I did not notice any spelling, grammar, or punctuation errors. The ending caught me by surprise because the sapling was dead due to unintentional childhood foolishness. Could it be that a lesson was learned from this? Is there a moral to the poem's story? I would have liked to have heard more about it. Maybe you could add a verse or 2 to the poem to answer these questions.

Overall. I enjoyed reading your item. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Great job!



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