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wild kitty becomes family pet
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Hello AmyJo-Spring's finally here! Author Icon,

Aw, I just LOVE this story. I read it and then I saw the prompt. You nailed the prompt perfectly. I didn't yet have a cat in October 2022. He found us in December of that year. Our orange cat wasn't feral, but he thinks he can live life outside on his own. (He clearly can't). He was sweet from day 1, so that's why we kept him. He now has two more cat friends to play with. And while he doesn't get to go outside by himself, I have a walking harness for him and he gets to have almost daily walks safely in our backyard.

Your poem is cute, especially with the addition of the emojis. My only possible suggestion for this item is that you give the first word in the intro line a capital letter:

wild kitty becomes family pet *Right* Wild



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