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![]() "Anniversary Reviews" ![]() ![]() My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. ![]() The author's reflections on life after coming out of the hospital. ![]() Great voice. There's wonderful conversational tone in the prose/memoir that really connects with the reader. ![]() This is told in the first person by the author. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. ![]() For me, I picked out the theme of life cleansing as seen through the lens of the storms of life. We all have our storms in life. Some are rockier than others, but storms are here to teach us, to look at our foibles and ultimately, to make us stronger. ![]() Nice, honest emotional beat and reflections, especially around God and connecting that to nature. ![]() I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read. ![]() The opening intrigues the reader. While we never really find out what placed our author in the hospital, it's the reflection afterword that connects with readers. Written with an honesty and sincerity that touches the heartstrings. Positive and uplifting. An Angel Army Review
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